Old 04-29-2006, 06:00 PM   #1
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Old 04-29-2006, 06:43 PM   #2
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Nice image!! I don't know if you cropped that yourself but it's a good job because hair is very difficult to get right. Good masthead too and the barcode area is very realistic.

Only a couple of things I'd perhaps revisit - the white shadow on your headlines is a bit unclear. On the lighter areas of your cover it disappears completely. Compare the "g" and the "n" in Angelina for instance. The font for the subhead also appears squeezed to me so that letters overrun.

The other thing I'd look at again is the placement of your edition number. It seems a bit strange in the foreground while your masthead is in the background - kinda makes Ms Jolie's head look like a sandwich. I think I'd move it further to the left or possibly utilise the space under the "Y".

A couple of spelling mistakes to take care of as well - the "t" in stretches and I'm not sure Hillary Swank has personally appeared in many khockout roles - unless there's a deliberate pun I'm missing somewhere?

But give yourself a big pat on the back for this one as, those minor points aside, it does look good.

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Old 04-29-2006, 08:51 PM   #3
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Wow...great look mag... but is just me or there is a kind of fog in the image? I liked the way u place the texts ( except the edition number...) and the bar code... But i agree with GlosRFC that the white shadow inst good... u made a professional look ... but u should try to make it better and i think u can do it

Mine mag -> http://www.kirupa.com/forum/showthread.php?t=217507

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Old 04-30-2006, 06:46 PM   #4
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thanks for the comments. can't wait till photoshop includes a spell checker

the foggy areas are supposed to be the glossyness of a high gloss mag ... guess i need a bit more to pull off the effect.

I did crop out the hair ... a neat trick i learned w/ vector shapes and feathered masks

really was an overnight job - tanks again

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Old 05-01-2006, 02:29 AM   #5
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Photoshop does have a spell checker...i try to use it as much as possible.. But i still use photoshop 7 a lot....so...hmmm?
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