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Ryall
November 25th, 2002, 10:45 PM
Blah, dont like it too much, but getting better... CCS please!

::edit:: scroll down for newer versions ::edit::

Here it is:

see edit:)

Peace

Ryall
November 25th, 2002, 10:58 PM
There is also a version with a bluish butterfly perched in the top right black area... but I like this one better.

Peace

lostinbeta
November 25th, 2002, 10:59 PM
Much better!!!

But that thing in the center doesn't really fit... you have sloppiness everywhere, then nice clean bright white lines building a train (?) in the middle :-\

Ryall
November 25th, 2002, 11:02 PM
Heres this version, I dunno which I like better...

http://www.grafikdesigns.com/photoshop7/grungeTrainCar2.jpg

Ryall
November 25th, 2002, 11:04 PM
I kinda liked the contrast of the mess and the lines.. here is is without any lines:

http://www.grafikdesigns.com/photoshop7/grungeTrainCar3.jpg

lostinbeta
November 25th, 2002, 11:06 PM
I like the last one the best. The one without the lines. I think i is great :)

Ryall
November 25th, 2002, 11:13 PM
If you look at the second one I changed it with the addition of some color - I like the contrast of the color, but I dont know if I like how I am using it.. scroll up and check it out.

Peace

lostinbeta
November 25th, 2002, 11:19 PM
It makes your picture look crooked... I am getting dizzy...lol.

It might be cool if you did that same line thing... but follow the side of the train.

Ryall
November 25th, 2002, 11:27 PM
hmmm, I'll look into it. Thanks for the input so far, I'll post a new one in a bit.

Peace

lostinbeta
November 25th, 2002, 11:32 PM
Sweet, can't wait :)

Ryall
November 25th, 2002, 11:39 PM
I tried the stipes, but they becam too distracting - mainly I just want the color so I went for this two tone look (see second one again)... I'm liking it more, but still not there.

Peace

lostinbeta
November 25th, 2002, 11:41 PM
Yeah, that does look nice :)

I hope you keep improving on it :)