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[bleutuna]

http://www.bleutuna.com

Finally. By now, i'm tired of looking at the design, but when i build the Flash version, I think I'll like it more. There's still some functionality that needs to be ironed out, and my programmer is doing that - namely, things you click on the main page should lead to that project, not the section. And the Programming page looks rather bare and boring.

But, it's launched, and I'll tweak and shine more in the next few days. But it's good to finally have it :)

[.soulty]

ahh cool bleutuna.. moved this to showcase & critiques for comments ;)

[bleutuna]

Ah, cool. Thanks sir :)

[Tommy_S]

I like the layout. The images look fine. But the menu is poor. It's too tightened and the font is small and dirty. Some images in Clients, move, when rollOvered. :hat:

[bleutuna]

Logo problem has been fixed. Thanks for taking note of that. What's your concern with the navigation exactly?

[Tommy_S]

What's your concern with the navigation exactly?
I don't like how it looks, on the whole: the font used for it and covering of space (too tightened, too close to the borders, etc.). Clear?

[BoonDock]

The navigation is my only complaint...its too bunched together, and the text is a bit blurred...and when I first viewed the website I didn't see the nav. right away... other than that I like the layout as a whole. I wouldn't use "language" on the site though. Unless you are headed towards a particular market. (you go to design and the first thing I see is "big *** posters...etc.") That isn't exactly the most professional thing to put up on your website. Anyways, it's a good site. Maybe try and incorporate some flash...if you want to. If not kewl, and kudos!

Boon out~ :hitman:

[fasterthanlight™]

I agree with what everyone else has said above, but theres a spelling mistake on the contact page. Intranet is spelled Intarnet.

[bleutuna]

Hmmm. The navigation seems to be bugging some people. I may redesign the top layer of the cake this weekend if others seem to have issues.

[The Who]

- I really like the overall color scheme of the site. But I agree with what people have said about the navigation being too small.

- Personally, I didn't even notice where the navigation was when the site finally popped up...it's just too tight.

- But it seems like you have some space between the 'Who We Are' image and your footer at the bottom, if you wanted to add top navigation above the four middle images...so that could be an option.



- Good work though!

[.soulty]

Hey bleutuna, i remember that aladdin job you posted a while back.. haha brought back some memories..:sigh:

I have to agree with the people here, the navigation needs some working on.. the header could simply made smaller to accompany a larger navigation, also include some padding to the nav holder and some letter spacing as well, epescially if your going for small fonts like you are.

Same applied for client list in interactive / design / ect.. you need some letter spacing or 1px larger font, things get hard to read on my monitor (@ 1600X1200 so i am not sure if your aiming for that sort of user market).

one last thing is the logo on the bottom left is sorta just a blurry mess, i can make out its your logo but wouldnt you want to show your logo in all its clarity as a index to your site, especially if your going to use that graphic as a shortcut for sites you design (maybe look into creating a pixel version of your font).

other than those points the site is solid, it touches on your style which i really like and shows your work and personalities pretty nicely.. fix those little issues(well nav is a big issue) and then your site will be as solid as most of your design I have seen from you ;)

[bleutuna]

Rock, thanks for the feedback guys :) I'm at 1920, so I'm used to things looking a little "blurry." Target audience is 800/1024 - because this is what most of our clients will be using.

[REEF·]

Great work man. I really like the layout of this site. Simple and quick! Tell your programmer he did a good job :P. Your "Drive the nation" poster has me laughing :lol:. It's very cool you guys designed a Legend of Zelda boxart.

[Saschimaro]

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[REEF·]

Dont say ?? after deleting your rude comment :sigh:.

[Saschimaro]

reefstar y are u saying dum things u kno wut? i dont kno why u are talkin to me all th time.....??

[REEF·]

You're not slick man. D*mn get a life do something better.

:sigh:

[nobody]

He should be leaving you guys alone now :)

Back to topic I do believe :thumb:

[TheGhostArm]

congratulations, xxviii, on coming out of the closet :thumb:
geez what a ***! :crazy:

[fasterthanlight™]

reefstar y are u saying dum things u kno wut? i dont kno why u are talkin to me all th time.....??

Somone types like a 7 year old....


congratulations, xxviii, on coming out of the closet
geez what a ***!

You've got balls saying that to a mod...

[TheGhostArm]

hey faster thanks yeah i think these mods are really big ***s :pleased: its funny though :pope:

[fasterthanlight™]

That wasn't a compliment, and I refuse to turn this into a mod - you flame war. Youll lose. That being said, lets get back on topic. I really do like the feel of your site tuna, And the nav on the top right definately needs some work. Either, make it more graphically prominent, or increase the size. This has been said before, but i needed to say it again to put this thread back on track...