submission: pyramid

[blackdeath]

Sooooooo after the novelty of working on the coffin (and Murderdolls became repedative :P), I decided to take a serious attempt at this pixel art thing. It's nothing really special, just something simple I put together. I think I'm starting to get the hang of shading too. If anybody has any suggestions about how I can improve this, please let me know!

[fasterthanlight™]

The shading is good, but its a bit off. What I mean is, see how the one side has the darker shading? well it actually goes from dark to light to dark. The horizontal parts of it are in the shadow of the vertical parts, so they should have a darker tint. Light source is coming from upper left corner in kville.

[scags]

fasterthanlight is right, you gotta fix that. Also, since it isn't a pyramid pyramid (egyptian) (or at least it doesn't look like one-sorry), but more of a aztec-y central America pyramid, maybe you could add some vines, and some cracks and stuff to make it look older. I think right now it is too plain.

[jokun]

a staircase going up the front side of it would be cool-something to get you to the top
and then maybe some kind of entrance

[e-sarbak]

We have a type pf pyramid already but maybe if you can do a Maya or Aztek type if pyramid with some plants on the pyramid it can be a good one...;)