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Dj.Stigma
November 24th, 2002, 01:26 AM
hi.
i'd be glad if you could evauate my www. i just started working on it about 5 hours ago and i'd like to make it modern and feedback and comments would help me to improve it. so jus write whatever you like or dislike about this project.
thanx

www.lnovotny.com

weirdO
November 24th, 2002, 05:44 AM
i luv the mask ... did u script it or tween it ??

only thing ... for moving sky background try using a "real" sky image without "cutout"-effect like the one u have now.

Dj.Stigma
November 24th, 2002, 11:44 AM
thanx for your feedback. i thought about real sky, but the image size is about 100k. this one is only 4k because i used a gef containing only 4 colors. and the mask is script/tweening. do you think it looks ok when i use such navigation?
thanx :)

Dj.Stigma
November 24th, 2002, 12:40 PM
i changed the sky and fixed my preloader. check it out now and please tell me if it's better. (my only problem is that now it is 132k big compared to 20k which it had before)

eyeinfinitude
November 24th, 2002, 04:18 PM
It looks cool so far, but why do you have it in a pop-up? Maybe its just me, but I'm not too fond of pop-ups that isn't necessary. I like your color scheme, but your splash page could use more work too. Why do you have that "click on the text above to enter" thing there, why not just have a "enter" that could be clicked? Overall your layout is clean, it has potential just needs some minor changes. =)

Dj.Stigma
November 24th, 2002, 06:06 PM
thanx for your feedback.
i worked only about 2 miutes on the index page because most of it is going to be replaced by graphix and some 3d animations.i did it in a popup because later on, i'm going to add some javascript to it so that it opens in fullscreen which looks cooler. i just didn't have time to do that, school exams are are coming so i need to spend more time studying. and the comment under the link is for some people who wouldn't get the idea of where to click because there is nothing that indicates that your mouse is over a button (i think you know what i mean).
but thanx for your feedback. i will sure work on it much more. hope to hear from you again.

Jubba
November 24th, 2002, 06:41 PM
no....not full screen. Full screens are evil. Personally when I see a site that is full screen I don't even look at the content, I just leave and never come back. Also, in your pop up window, please define the background color. I see it as blue because that is my default color.

in the body tag of the page do this:



<body bgcolor="white">

Dj.Stigma
November 24th, 2002, 07:50 PM
thanx. don't worry, i know HTML well enough to set the bg color :)
and i haven't decided yet what the final bg color will be. this www is just in the first stage. how do you like the other ideas in it (the sky, navigation,...)? i know there is not much in there yet, but i'm working on it.
thanx for your comments

Dj.Stigma
November 25th, 2002, 12:14 AM
hi to all the viewers. feel free to comment anything you want. i'd really like to hear everybody's opinion about my new www. I know it's nothing special (not even completed) i just though that by getting some positive + NEGATIVE feedback, i might be able to improve it and learn for my future projects.
thanx

h88
November 25th, 2002, 05:13 PM
Its really cool so far, but try increasing the hit-area.

Dj.Stigma
November 25th, 2002, 06:05 PM
hi. i'm having trouble with that. i wanted to move the center of the cursor, but it didn't work and because the mouse is locked to center, it is ****ty. i have no clue what's wrong here. it always worked but now doesn't.
thanx for your feedback.

slayerment
November 25th, 2002, 06:37 PM
its cool but im not a fan of the custom cursor. it lags the site.

h88
November 25th, 2002, 08:00 PM
Well, am with slayerment on that one, i would just say u dun have to hide the mouse. :)

Dj.Stigma
November 25th, 2002, 09:58 PM
i guess you're right. i'm just gonna get rid of the custom cursor. thanx for your comments

sintax321
November 26th, 2002, 02:41 PM
The popup has to go and don't use full screen. Most users rely on the browser window navigation and when it dissapers the do to. I loved the background and the sky i like the cartoon type feel, much better than a real sky. The menu system I would lable a bit better, instruct the user to mouse over that area some ppl leave if they can't easaly find the menu. All and all nice start.:)

Dj.Stigma
November 26th, 2002, 06:00 PM
thanx. i'm always happy when i get positive feedback. i'm not gonna make it full screen but i think that the people who will go to my www are going to know where to go to find the navigation and i'm probably going to make a VISIBLE "Help" button which users can click to find out how to use my navigation.
thanx a lot though.

sintax321
November 27th, 2002, 01:24 AM
That works just as well.:)