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pointlessthings
November 16th, 2002, 03:27 PM
i am working on an intro, it isn't nearly done yet, but could you ugys please take a look at it and give me some feedback....

CLICK HERE FOR INTRO (http://grafdesign.pointlessthings.com/intro1.html)

*pt*

Ryall
November 16th, 2002, 04:27 PM
Its not bad, a good start - I'd say it is a little on the plain side, could use a bit more excitement. Also as you move from one statement to the next, I would stop the animation in the previous, it is a bit distracting as they all keep going. Keep at it!

Peace

h88
November 16th, 2002, 06:12 PM
when i saw the movie form the first look, okay i liked it, but when the orange titles started counting uo, hmm, was'nt so cool, first of all, i would recommened adding sound, and, removing some of those sentences! :)

pointlessthings
November 16th, 2002, 06:21 PM
ok...well if i take out the sentences the intro will have no content at all?

h88
November 16th, 2002, 06:22 PM
hehe, didnt mean all of them though!

slayerment
November 16th, 2002, 06:29 PM
i dont like it. for a design intro, it seems very plain, and unorganized. its kinda laggy w/ the mask too.