Self-promotion for graduation book

[sintax]

Hello,

Just as squanman (I'm in his class) I had to design a little piece to promote myself and to be added in the graduation book of our year.

Squanman already suggested that i had to get rid of that actionscript at the bottem left corner. I might do this later, but I'm going to wait until you nice folks give some feedback too..

So please, feel free to comment...

http://www.earfocus.com/promo/ontwerp.jpg

[slumgutt]

I really like the work you've done with the font. I agree on that the ac has to go tho. And I think the hand-drawn style of the (well) hand kind of clashes with the typing, which again - i love.

[3d Nirvana]

I agree with slumgut, the text is extreamly nice, but the hand isn't up to the same quality.

Cheers!
3dnirvana

[Yeldarb]

I really like the text, but I'm not a big fan of the hand.
Leave the aS, it looks good :)
3d Nirvana, your footer is HUGE -- 348kb

[sintax]

Thanx for the advice... I have changed the position of the elements a bit, and I found that the hand fits the overall style better this way. What do you think?

http://www.earfocus.com/promo/ontwerp_06.jpg

[Yeldarb]

I don't like the tilt of the sintax.be and the actionscript now.
The hand looks better though.