Sup ppl?? Crit Pls

[Desire]

_ONE (http://homepage.ntlworld.com/s.rate/Love.jpg)

_TWO (http://homepage.ntlworld.com/s.rate/MyBody.jpg)

Just two pieces ive been workin on all day. Would apreciate some constructive crit if you dont mind :)

[iLikePie]

i like the second one much better, the first is just far too generic for my liking *though it's done fairly well i guess*.

The only thing i would change in the second one is the colour of the word "reams"... the pink is too bright methinks, perhaps a deeper one (maybe based on one of the background colours) would look better. Otherwise i like it though, nice colour choices and balance. Not quite sure of the relevance of "my bodY" but who cares? :P

[sWo0p]

First one *RULES* i love those types of walls.. :P good job.. :P

secound one brings me back to retro or flowerpower.. find it a little dull :S

[.soulty]

second one is nice, but ive seen that curly shape before, not sure where.... hmm in any case i think the blue text kiinda kills the peice, actually im not too sure on that blue at all, its sorta give the elements a blured effect because of the contrasting colours, it can look good but some of the elements (the text) make me think otherwise.

[Desire]

thanks ppl! i got the idea of the circle one out of this mag i got a week or to back. I was just looking though at diffrent peoples stuff and saw one like that, at frist i tryed to do a web layout in that style but it didnt work to well so i ended up with makeing that insted.

Kinda did the abstract one cos i aint done anything like that in awhile and its always nice to go back and try old stuff, u used to do, get fresh ideas from it and see the style of work from new angles.

but ye thanks for the crit guys.

laters
Faith.

[mlk]

i really enjoy both of them

(well maybe the colours could be worked on a bit more for the second one =))

[=guinness=]

just looks like a lot of tech brushes