This is my entry

[sigalasgeo]

Hi all i am absolutelly new to flash and to this forum too.. :-)This is my first animation.i hope you liked!Please inform me if the animation is too slow.Thanks u!

http://www.geocities.com/sigalasworld/aids.html

please tell me your opinion..i think i have to do some changes!

[wizard]

It should say: "Do not be afraid..." ;)

I think you should make the text stand out more... to be honest with you I don't like the colors, it's too dark. Not bad for your first animation. :}

[sigalasgeo]

thanks u

[Ψ]

i like it very much but i dont know what the blood is supposed to symbolize.

[samsara]

are you really a beginner of flash, this is a very good animation if so...

the actual content of the movie is very ominous though, even though it says 'do not [be] afraid,' the dark colours, blood and music does kind of muster up some kind of 'afraidness' [if thats a word??].
samsara.

[sigalasgeo]

Thanks really for your good words..In fant it is my first flash animation.I started from kipura tutorials and then i saw about the contest..I have used Swish before but flash is totally different and much beter.i am gonna change "afraid of"
tu!

[lunatic]

I also don't think you want people to protect their shelves. Rather they should protect their selves. ;)

[macneilslt]

(requiem for a dream theme) so scarry, I like it.

[icio]

I also don't think you want people to protect their shelves. Rather they should protect their selves. ;)

lol. i dunno... those ****ed termites!!

[flashtered]

wrong?! read the guidlines for the contest.

[flashtered]

visit http://www.aids-awareness.org.
you might need some clue for the text you should use.

[sigalasgeo]

could u please be more specific?
I HAVE NOT READ the gidelines ut i think my text is logical.
Tu!