Review these couple of flyers...

[berkoWitZ]

Hi, Im trying to convince a client who wants to make a flyer with vector art that Im good in it:P Thats why Im going to show him these 2 small examples, I know they´re not the best vector art u have ever seen but Im trying to learn, please tell me what do u people think, thanks!

[protagonist]

with marcela: fonts and layout are fine, but the look in her eyes just doesn't feel right. i believe its mostly the curve of "light" above her left eye that makes it too unsymmetrical. basically its a psychological truth that symmetrical faces are considered beatiful, so perhaps you might want to make her prettier... :)

with dani: the face looks great, i personally don't like the way the "9" looks in your font there, it's too round, but maybe that's just me... ;)

[berkoWitZ]

great thanks! yes the eyes are always an issue, what I made this time was just hide more her face, like in the second pic, I think it looks better, also ur right about the font in the second one, I´ll change it :)

[protagonist]

great idea with moving her, you could try to give her a just a very little more, so that a slightly more of her left eye is covered,
i just put a piece of paper on the screen and if i cover her up till her left eye is completely hidden and only the last piece of her left eyebrow can be seen, it feels perfect for me...

[berkoWitZ]

cool, ur right again, I´ll make it :thumb: what about the colors??? I also want to see how they look like with some grunge brushes.....

[berkoWitZ]

anyone else??? :( I change this one a little more....

[protagonist]

"dani" 's colors are perfect :thumb:

to me, "marcela" is too bright now, i'd like to see more of the gradient you used at the top right corner, i wonder how some "warm" colors would look on her, like orange...? :)

[Pomme_]

or pink... PINK IS PURTY. So is Prune and Bordeau (heavier reds - #993300 types of red and #993399 types of purple...)

[berkoWitZ]

ok, an orange and a pink version, doesnt look that bad..... :)

[protagonist]

pink wins :thumb:

[berkoWitZ]

thanks man, yea, hate to say it, but it looks good in pink

[shack]

i like the pink :love: it actually looks good (in this case) , what are these for anyway?

[berkoWitZ]

well, I have to show them to a posibble client who wants to make some flyers about a party. similar to these ones :)