rikiwaka's intro

[rikiwaka]

hello here is my intro for aids awareness ....

music or sound will be added soon ... :mu:

http://www.ontheground.be/aids_awareness.html

critics are welcome ...

[3d Nirvana]

nice one! :)

[wizard]

Ohhh, we have a WINNER!!!

Lol, that is very nice... good job. :thumb:

[ratbaggy]

simple yet pretty effective. I have to say, some of the typography is shocking, but it doesn't really detract.

[sinus_]

w00t! very nice!!! :D

[johnlouis]

:) yeah! it's very nice!! :)

[dr.ew]

this is the best one I've seen so far =]
One thing, the phrase "Are you sure to be protected?" seems a bit awkward.
maybe just "are you protected?" or "are you sure that you are protected?"
just my $0.02.

[CanadianGuy]

I agree with drew.

Nice job. Also, the word spacing on the last bit looks a little weird.

[Kyri]

Great jorb!! Except I think it isn't quite 30 seconds long

[khawar]

just a one word "best"

[wvd426]

yup also lovin it!

[rikiwaka]

thanks for all critics ...
and thanks for the correction of my english grammar... ( I usually speek french) :blush:
i'm working on the sound ...

[rikiwaka]

ok the sound is on ...

[chenu]

Dude, this is great. The sound does flow with this intro completely.

I suggest making it more "in your face" because it is an issue that affects us all.

[El_Thierro]

It's great man!

When you mentioned you speak french, I looked at your location and you're in Brussels!

That's my capital!

Belgium ownz! :love:

:thumb: :beam:

edit: if I'd been smart, I could've gotten it from the .be link as well.

...but I'm not :beam:

[firestorm9527]

Very nice job!

[cruizectrl]

I like it alot.. Simple but very effective.

You make the music for it?

At first I thought it was the drumline to Rolling Stones "Please allow me to introduce myself" I almost shat my pants.. That would of been fly. (meaning the music, not the shat) :p:

[flashtered]

nicely done but i think the theme should be about aids awareness (?).

[rikiwaka]

this is a very strange question .... :crazy:

[ultranet]

A simple piece of great work.....
nice work dude!!!

[wizard]

Wow... 09-08-2004