Input on Pic

[DyersEve]

Well can someone just tell me if this is cool or just plain stupid cause i cant decide for myself, and then give a little reason cause i would like to know what to improve. Thanks.

http://teamnerd.tripod.com/random/electricity.txt

[DyersEve]

i got an addition to my input request

http://teamnerd.tripod.com/random/dyerseve.txt

[Ryall]

your second one is much better.... a bit of advice on the first one: get that yellow thing out of there!!! You first one, is a bit unorganized, and well not really too interesting, no effects that grab your eyes. The second one, while very simplistic too at least has a much more pleasing layout. Keep at it - you're already improving.

Peace

[pom]

I could only see the second one, and it's not bad. But I have no idea what you were trying to show... It looks a little bit like my room when I wake up, before I put my glasses on...

pom :cowboy:

[DyersEve]

yeah, on both pics i was just randomly doing things and hoping it would be cool when i was done...but anyway, thanks for input i'll keep at it.