Comments plz

[hsadan]

here's one of my first..so help me improve on it =)

HSA Dan 2002 (http://geocities.com/hsadan2001/hello.html)

i think the words in the upper left hand corner are kinda extra...any idea how i can blend it in, should i get rid of it, or is it completely ok?

suggestions, critism, watever, pls

[eilsoe]

I think the words look kinda weird on a heavy grid like that, and the flare in the background looks a little grittish.

Should have the same sharpness as the rest of the image...

oh, and add some color! unless it's the black&white look you're after :P

neat...! :) Good for a first try...!

[hsadan]

haha..but i can't seem to find a suitable color scheme :P

um...looks gritty? u talking about the 'rays', rite? i made it by drawing the lines and then radial blurring it...i used the good quality, maybe i should use the best quality next time :)

i have made some changes, including removing the words in the upperleft..but i can't change the flare cos i don't want to do it again :smirk: (took quite awhile ;))

thx for your comments...
(Anyone else? =) )

[eilsoe]

oki, but u could also go for the built in flare filter...

[hsadan]

that wouldn't be too original, would it? ;)

[eilsoe]

Heck no... it's there for a reason...

[hsadan]

lol ok...