My Entry

[Kyri]

Here is my entry, but this is probably just a rough draft and will be changed later. As you can see, it's not too good yet :crying: Any suggestions?
View it HEREhttp://www.kyrib.com/aids.html
----I changed a lot of aspects, hopefully it's better than before!

[mrE]

probably better than anything i can do. lol.

[Ectheo]

Uhhh...if you got some time, put a pre-loader in it.....I waited forever, and realized that it didn't play automatically (using Firefox 0.9).

[Kyri]

Hmm I tried it in firefox .9 and it worked fine...it should play automatically. I don't know what the problem is...it's only 127 KB. But maybe I should put the preloader in anyways.

[mprzybylski]

million not millon

[Kyri]

fixed :)

[Sluger]

The pictures need to look better, like the quality, and try to use a ligther blue, and make the border a straight line.

[Kyri]

I agree about the pictures, but I kind of like the scraggly border :D

[Sluger]

Iono, that border threw me off.

[Kyri]

OK, I fixed some things and changed a whole part. I also added sound effects and more music, but I don't know if I should change the border or not...what does someone else think?

[Set_0ne]

Yea, I think I'd change the border and the background..to me the colours don't match.

[Kyri]

OK, I changed the border to a solid line and the background to very light gray, and I think it does look quite a bit better than before! Thanks for all of the help