T-shirt design

[[uber]]

Hey guys... I like to make things that reflect the social and political ideals of today... and i like to make fun of certain fads... well... i made a t-shirt thats a combination of PSA and the lack of PC in the world. Note: this shirt is not meant to be disgusting... it is a lighthearted view on a serious subject.

[[uber]]

Its a first run at it... i got to adjust the arms a bit, and adjust the text.

[Krilnon]

The character looks well designed.

The message is pretty clear too.

[paddy.]

A better font would definitely help it.

[[uber]]

I don't know if i wanna do a serif or san-serif font... if its a serif... it kinda looks like a 1950's Health center PSA... which is cool. if I use a chunky san-serif, then it will be more toonish and more funny....

[bwh2]

i'd like to see Mr. Safety in like big bold block letters. as if he were like a superhero or something. maybe give him a cape.

[berkoWitZ]

I like it! But I was thinking something like this, with ur permission :)

[[uber]]

Yeah... I'm still playing around with the text... Just really wanted to get the primary message out for Feedback... but i actually realized his thumbs up is backwards... so i gotta fix that. But i'll probably block out the font.

[[uber]]

here's a revision... i made the thumbs up the right way and added a cartoon font.

[apetrie]

I suggest making his eyes somewhat larger and rotating his hand slightly inward. Right now the thumbs up looks so completely to the side that it looks a bit awkward.

I like the new font.. you need something to break up the text a bit. Perhaps making "Mr Safety" larger or making the words in the quotes red or italic or all of the above.

I'm just nitpicking though, I think its good enough as is.

[berkoWitZ]

mm dont know, that font its so-so, check out dafont.com, they have lots of comic and cartoon fonts...

[[uber]]

i'm happy wit it for now...its hard to go font scrounging on dial-up(poor me:( ) se the final thing at
http://www.cafeshops.com/ubermensch_ver2

[Toke]

awesome illustration :D

[Rasta666]

i like the design.. dont use cafe press, they have the right to use any of there customers logos unless copyrighted