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d100763
August 3rd, 2004, 06:16 AM
let me know how I could improve the flower...Yes, I know this effect has been done before, credit to pixelranger. I am trying to use a similar effect. Thanks.
width=275 height=200

signifer123
August 3rd, 2004, 06:17 AM
I like it i guess its kinda fast

d100763
August 3rd, 2004, 06:27 AM
maybe I should slow it a bit

wanyo
August 3rd, 2004, 09:09 AM
It looks good and I think the speed was fine. Nice attention to details.
The second wave of it drawing in looks a little over done. It looks more like spiderwebs and less like a flower. Perhaps try having the flower mask in as well instead of having it kinda flicker in seperate of the drawn in lines.

bwh2
August 3rd, 2004, 10:56 AM
The second wave of it drawing in looks a little over done. It looks more like spiderwebs and less like a flower.i definitely agree.

REEFˇ
August 3rd, 2004, 11:43 AM
Nice job :thumb:.

I'd give the flower more perspective though. Distort and slant it a little or something. This way it doesn't look like your view is just looking at the flower and/or on top of it :).

- Reefy

d100763
August 3rd, 2004, 03:20 PM
I think you are right, I was trying to get a wireframe look, but it does look more webbed than wireframed. I will give the flower itself a mask or a quick alpha tween in. Thanks everyone, thanks reef

chriskalani
August 3rd, 2004, 03:28 PM
It should have more of a transition [more gradual]... it is so abrupt.

3d Nirvana
August 3rd, 2004, 04:22 PM
to give the flower more of a wire frame look, add vertex points!

sirtimbly
August 3rd, 2004, 04:34 PM
Yay! Vertex Points! :nerd:

d100763
August 3rd, 2004, 04:38 PM
vertex points? the ones at the intersection of the wireframe?

3d Nirvana
August 3rd, 2004, 05:19 PM
yes wherever 2 lines meat.... u put a point :)

like this :)

width=550 height=400

//thanks berko

berkoWitZ
August 3rd, 2004, 05:24 PM
the same code u used in ur footer :)

prstudio
August 3rd, 2004, 05:44 PM
i would try to make the second wave more random