KWest Flash Intro

[fresh0308]

Im not much of a flash person although i do know how to use it.
Im working on a project for someone and i was wondering what you guys think of this. To tacky? Please give honest feedback!

http://jake.exit-13.net/fs/3/kw.html

[bwh2]

looks like you tried to copy seanjohn.com. first, i'd increase the fps to about 30-35 and draw the outline w/o the grey fill. fill in after the outline's drawn.

if you're going to use a color photo, fill in each section w/a corresponding color and then bring in the image after it blinks a few times. i might also make the dashes shorter and flip the image.

not a bad start, just needs some tweaking.

[slayerment]

Hey not bad. I think you need to make the outlining quicking and use more easing to add emotion. Try to do something other than outline just one guy as well. Keep it up and keep going.