www.eternityproject.net

[Zakalwe]

Hello everyone!

I've just finished the new version of my web site... but I just can't get anywhere any proper feedback. (Just the usual 'wow', 'cool', 'i like it' etc)

So I thought, to get some critiques, I ought to show the site to people that also know something about Flash ;)

And since Kirupa was where I gathered most of my knowledge to make the site...


www.eternityproject.net (http://www.eternityproject.net)

[RabBell]

I don't like the green toolbar...maybe a gradient would be better

The orange buttons look OK but the rollover doesn't

I like the way eternity project is displayed and the way your image appears (I take it that thats you in the image)

Good work :thumb:

[G]

I think you should maybe get rid of the tabs and have simple text links like the 'show statistics' link, to me the tabs looked a little too bold for the site. Apart from that I found the site was set out nicely, it definatley holds the content well and the transitions were smooth.

I found your games exceptionally good as well.

[imanstudios]

+s
 The masks on your title and your face is good.
 I like your contact text boxes very clean and neat.
 Your portfolio display menu is nice, kind of flows smoothly.

-‘s
 The streaming flash lines in the background the white ones, you should make them a little more subtle, more opacity.
 You layout could use a shadow around it, on the edges of the green, a shadow would look nice. Its kind of flat right now
 The buttons I believe are too big, the over button (aqua color) doesn’t suit your site very much imo. Different font use.
 Instead of a button that says to beginning, maybe home would be more appropriate.
 The gradients used to look good back in the flash 4 days, now its more solid colors that are being used in web sites, imo.

Like you said this project never ends so I guess keep working on it.
Solid start, with room for improvement.

[Zakalwe]

Finally some critiques! Exactly what I was hoping for. :pleased:

So thanks!

And about the tabs at the top... I agree. They're slightly too big and the rollover state needs to be changed as well. They are pretty much the only thing that's left from my first draft and I haven't yet gotten round to fixing them.
I've also been thinking of doing something for the outside area of the green bars. Maybe a shadow or so, but it definitely still needs something.

To RabBell: yes, it is my picture. C:-)
And to MgR: thanks for the feedback on the games!