Please re-check my site

[vaguemedia]

I posted this site last weekend, really wasn't finished(and probably shouldn't have posted it).

I just finished up(for the most part), and think it's came a long way.

Tell me what you think. It's not 5megs, I promise.

Thanks
Nick

http://mywebpages.comcast.net/nickgrady/test.htm

[Yeldarb]

Im not really a fan of the gray :-/
nice music though

[RoyBurst]

I like the transitions. The colors all seem too solid for me, some gradients or shading might add a nice touch.

[RabBell]

Just a couple of things really...

1. Yeldarb's right about the grey, maybe try a gradient instead?
2. The music is from the movie Trainspotting, the withdrawl scene. Better be careful about permission to have that song on your site. I'm not 100% clear on the issue so I stay clear of it and buy Royalty Free Music, I'm pretty sure music from a movie soundtrack won't be Royalty Free and thats where the problems start.

Other than that it looks great, especially the 3d city in the intro :thumb: Only thing is most people skip the intro and won't see it, any way to use it in the site?

[bwh2]

check your spelling on initiative throughout. i'd center the popup.

also, i've always felt that a royal blue bg is real tough to pull off. royburst was right in saying that the colors are too solid. i don't know if gradients will help. they sometimes make things look cheesy. i'd try some texture fills.

[queengraph]

hi, I'm new on kirupa, just "walking around", I've find this topic...
Take a look on outlines of your page layout, I've see some lines bigger than others...
... and sorry 4 my terrible english!
Bye!

[invisible7]

well, to be honest, the layout is okay, but it has a very corperate/templatey feel to it. This, coupled with the music selection comes across as institutional in feel. Ultimately, from a design standpoint I think it lacks elegance.

The color scheme could be experimented with.

I personally don't like horz. image scrollers that don't have a seperate timeline control.

I would place an image with every page of copy. I would organize the copy in a more "graphically pleasing" manner.

All the transitions are exactely the same.

The audio turns off, but once you select a button it turns on again.

The text is fuzzy. Check the x/y position.

[queengraph]

well, to be honest, the layout is okay
mmm...
beware of outlines! :)