Hey, Chek out my site, my 1st 1!

[dmonic_666]

Hye people, can you have a look at my site for a bit, its my first try at making a real site and i think its cool so thats all that matters i supose, neways, please view it and i hope you like it!
My Site (http://www.geocities.com/dmonic_666)

[G]

first site? it says version 9 on the first page.

the flash intro was kind of dissapointing after waiting for a while for it to load. I think your counter is broken as it still says the hits is 0. I liked the news section, you lead a very intersting life...as for the site just modify the size of that intro and fix your counter and your good to go!

[RabBell]

The intro was confusing. That big spinning geometric thing was impressive and I was waiting for something good to happen, but it didn't. Kind of an anti-climax.

With the pictures I would add a link to the images so the user can click those and see a bigger version, I would keep the view link as well though.

Good attempt though.
:thumb:

[Kristopher]

novel try at a good looking first site. keep learning :)

[ykol20]

Make the spinning thing explode in the end. Some kind of climax....

[minimalistik]

sorry man but the site was a bit diappointing. You should create a structual layout instead of placing text anywhere. The header doesnt quite fit with the rest of the site and the text was not a good pick. Personally i think the site should not have been somewhat in flash. It was a good first try however. You should experience css/html site first before flash, flash isnt always the key to a great website ;)

btw, you didnt possibly use pagebuilder did you?

[dmonic_666]

Thanks for the help, I'm gonna update it in a while usin sum of the stuff u recomeneded. that site was made in dreamweaver btw, its just a clumped together cos i dnt like people having to scroll down pages, I like it all there to see at first