Check it out (my portfolio)

[Zak]

hey here it is, just a portfolio of mine, not all of the work is up yet:

Here (http://zapped.uplinked.us)

and a recent clients site Whifflebat Brutality (A band):

WBB (http://Whifflebat.uplinked.us)

hope you like them

[.soulty]

a pretty cool little site, a few things, the entry section would be better if you indicated that i have to press something to get through, maybe a highlight colour when i mouse over.

Also the links sections , while you have a cool little shape tween animation happening there, i think it needs to speed up a little.. too slow. maybe increase the fps or just arrange the keyframes for the animation.

:: just wondering have you tried a very subtle background pattern ? just curious on how it would look.

[Zak]

Thanks for the comments, that gave me some things to look at, nope I havent tried i background but that sounds good to try a suttle one, i will and see how it looks. again thanks for the comments.

[mansour]

good
- after the short intro there's this logo that comes up anywayz i took me time to figure out that i'm suppose 2 press to enter, i think u should get rid of the enter button it's useless, it doesn't anytime to load ur little portfolio. ur website is empty!, no images, no animations! all i c is text:(.

- the second website how ever looks very similar to the first website(portfolio), it doesn't really fit in as a band website!

anywayz i wish luck:thumb:

[minimalistik]

nice, something im similarly going to do but with the added phtography and personal stuff as well..... coming sooner or later/////lolz

A major problem however is your client's website. You shouldn't have made the same layout and design look like your own one. Your client would have wanted a unique design wouldnt he?

[Voodoo~Chile]

The good thing about the website is that's straight to the point.
I liked the shaking efect when you press the enter button.

But what struck me was when I went to the band's website... it is exactly the same thing, plus I think the color scheme doesn't go well with a rock band anyways.

You got a good idea, but develop it a bit (ok maybe a lot) more!
:)

Would check out my website in Site Check? The thread is: http://www.kirupaforum.com/forums/showthread.php?s=&threadid=51772

[.soulty]

Voodoo... if you want a particular person to check out your site or thread for that matter , PM them. dont add your link to someone elses thread who is asking for suggestion. dont you think its a little rude?, imagine if in your thread someone posted the same thing and then no one replies in your thread and just goes to the link. would be unfair, true?

sorry for the rant, just trying to prevent it from happening again.
no harm done no harm intended.
cheers
.soulty

[Zak]

Thanks for all the comments, ya the site i did was for a freind, who has a band he was the one who actually showed me a design of kinda what he wanted and i just expanded on it a little, but thanks guys i will take this all into consideration.