poster project - input need

[Ryall]

Hey everyone.... haven't been around in a while.. so HI again! =)

I wanted some input on something I am working on. It is a poster style project that has a "pro-democracy, pro-freedom, voting is good, voice your opinion, etc..." theme behind it. This what I've got so far... I wanted it to stay clean/simple, but be attractive and get the message across.

http://www.grafikdesigns.com/powerOfChoice.gif

I feel it is missing something, just cant put my finger on it... ideas/comments??

of course this is a WAY scaled down version

Peace

[reverendflash]

I think you need more contrast between the greens...

I also think the font is a cop-out. Try to find something with some emotion behind it...

if I could be more vague, believe me I would...

Howz SB?

Revhttp://aulman.com/rev.gif

[Ryall]

I definitly agree about the font... I'm gonna look for something good, that might be it. SB... well interesting you mention it, I am currently in AZ on my way to Chicago where I will be living for about a year (after which I will be returning to the SB area!)....

Anyone else have some ideas??

[Ryall]

I might need to rethink the entire typo... hmmmm it might be killing it... **** I just dont know.

[reverendflash]

I like the graphic, but maybe a blue bg...

then the font could be a bolder, rounder font...

also, you have no white whatsoever included...

just more input

Revhttp://aulman.com/rev.gif

[Ryall]

still looking for a font... here are some others colors I was messin with so I put em all together:
http://www.grafikdesigns.com/powerOfChoice03.gif

[ecobocom]

The one with white backround is OK, but I suggest to change the hand color (only) scheme to red-orange-brown.
Nice work. I like the simplicity.

[UNFLUX]

that's a sweet poster in all colors actually. I agree with the font,
and before I read any of the posts is what I was gonna say.

Since it's theme seems to be more out of peace than anything,
i would stay away from red. I actually like the green (1st one you
posted) and the white-ish one. I don't necessarily agree it should
be red for the hand, but some other really contrasting color would
look superb -- maybe the bluish-purple of the one on the left.

sweet concept though, all around. =)

[Ryall]

Im still looking for a good font for this one... nothing seems to grab me...hmmm. Well here is yet another version:

http://www.grafikdesigns.com/powerOfChoiceNEW.gif

[reverendflash]

here is something quick

Revhttp://aulman.com/rev.gif

[Ryall]

see I think those fonts look too....casual, comic, loopy, whatever... Im trying to convey power in the message.... id like to keep it all in the same font, and I definitly dont want the FONT to stand out but rather the words.. know what I mean... I see where you are coming from - the font needs more emotion behind it... I am just having a hard time finding something that is balanced between the aspects... "circle of hell" by Chaz Maviyana-Davies is a good example..... man could I use any more words to explain that? and could I be less clear?

Peace

oh also "Cimas HIV" by the same person