Guidance Required

[lobstars]

Hey any comments are welcome. I'm preety new to this and I'm not really sure what I should do to improve my site.
It isn't finished yet so any ideas towards improving it are welcomed :)
mysite.freeserve.com/flas...quare.html (http://mysite.freeserve.com/flashflash/redsquare.html)

Many thanks

[dansflash2001]

Hey Simon!

Some music would be nice. I like your tweening effect on the intro. By the way when the text appers on the moviescreen, try to slant it to give the perspective. Good start! :)

[okjosss]

hey!... i like the animation to!... very nice!..

salut!

JOSS