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strivedi
January 28th, 2004, 06:04 PM
I am working on a design for my personal site and to get to know Photoshop & Flash better. On the attched image, the menu will go arcoss the top, under that the movie will load with a transparent .. ie.. an Overlay effect possilbly.....

Just thought I get some feedback and some pointers before I proceed much farther. The original image is from stock.xchng if anyone was wondering.

Thank You.

prstudio
January 29th, 2004, 02:38 AM
i like the style, perhaps on the sign...apply a "color balance" in photoshop add about 20 red and 20 yellow. 20-35.

might have to watch how sharp it is though with those yellow tabs.

CanadianGuy
January 29th, 2004, 02:44 AM
Very cool pic! I'd probably make the type in the sign the same colour as the X over the bed. I like the idea you have for the orange buttons. I don't know how you would animate this but it would be cool if you could make the fence rip open and have stuff inside.

strivedi
January 29th, 2004, 11:44 AM
I'll try out the suggestions. Now it would be nice to find a tut on how to "rip" open the fence....that sounds like a very cool idea.
I read something about using masks....we'll see....

One thought was to have the menu items "rock" back and forth with a little "creek" sound when they are clicked. I might do that first...sounds easier. *heh*

Thanks.

morse
January 29th, 2004, 01:33 PM
I doubt you'll find a tutorial on ripping a fence. :beam:

strivedi
January 29th, 2004, 05:25 PM
"I doubt you'll find a tutorial on ripping a fence. "

Surely someone has thought to rip a fence before! *heh*

Or indeed a challenge now awaits!

Laslett
January 29th, 2004, 06:28 PM
Like the colour contrast with the reds and yellow on the black / white image. A fence rip would be nice. You could always go all alien, roswell style?