logo check

[DDD]

Curious to see which ones you like and or any comments or critiques. This is for a clothing company (athletic gear). I am entering it in a logo design contest for the hell of it.

Fire away.http://www.implod.com/clients/logos/ABSTRACTF.GIF

[kei]

nice choice of colour
i like 5 the best :)

[nobody]

Yeah I'm going to have to go with 5 as well.
3 sort of looks like the air force logo thinger.

[reverendflash]

I like #4, but I really don't like the 'r' ...

it doesn't look proportionally correct in comparison to the rest of the characters...

thingy.

Revhttp://aulman.com/rev.gif

[teet]

i like 4 and 5.

-teet

[Soul]

I think 1 kinda flows the best

[DDD]

thanks ya'll just as I expected evenly dispersed likes. So it is hard to pick. :beam: Thanks ya'll....I will post some others in a bit here....

Keep the crits coming if you like.

[.soulty]

i like 5 , but i think the length of the R is too long, The length of the R should match the length of the L. maybe check that out.

:)

[prstudio]

4
5
4
5
4
5
454545454 wait

5

[sinus_]

um 3... its the most simple... :) nice

[iLikePie]

i think 4 is better than 5, it just feels more balanced with that little overhang...

[DDD]

okay I need to change this logo.....too many folks think it is a "r"....It is supposed to resemble an "f".....dang it. Back to the drawing board. Thanks guys

[tommythewolfboy]

I like 5, but prefer 4 as the longer yellow line infers movement (a good thing for sports wear I suppose!)

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[prstudio]

who on earth thought it was an "r?"

was the huge words underneath "rontline"

lol.

[reverendflash]

I was speaking of the "r" in the word frontline, not the graphic "F"

just to clarify my post.

Revhttp://aulman.com/rev.gif

[FlashSwimmer]

i like 5... but there is a comment :D
make the angle of the tow shape above same... i mean you make it very bent at first and in the end it's less bent than the beigning... :puzzled: .
i hope you got it :D

[DDD]

hey flash thanks for the input....but I dont understand it? heehee....come again?

Okay thanks rev......To me it looks like a "F" but that could have been because I drew it..... I may leave it now. Ya'll think that would be a cool logo on athletic aparrel for kids, teens and young adults?

[reverendflash]

I think #4 lends itself easier to an "f", which is why I chose it...

Revhttp://aulman.com/rev.gif

[Coppertop]

the orange is a bit to pale me thinks.

in all honesty, I didn't think any of them were that great :pa: - but #4 seemed best of them.

[prstudio]

DDD did your client feel it looked like an R?

go with 4 if there is confusion, and Rev's right about the text "r" underneath the logo.

nice work man.

[DDD]

eh......it is for a contest.....I was just curious.

[FlashSwimmer]

i tried what i told you about but i don't like it so keep it as it is :D
5 is the best :thumb: