My First Flash Site

[timhlu]

Hi everyone,

Please visit my first flash site and give me some feedback:

www.geocities.com/timhlu/flashgws.html (http://www.geocities.com/timhlu/flashgws.html)

Cheers,
Tim

[iCu MeHoo]

you have already posted that here before and we all saw it.. or at least i remember looking at it.. my one opinion is that it lacke creativity, excitement and overall artistic talent [no offense]

my ideas would be to add some shapes.. some sort of weird designs.. something.. blur this, speed up that.. things like that.. its too plain overall i guess is what i am getting to.

tryin to help.. =] oh and shouldnt this topic be under 'site check' section?

[Vts31]

i think your site is good content wise. and in the idea of it. What brings your site down is the execution of these elements. I would suggest you look through some of flashkits featured sites for inspiration.

[iCu MeHoo]

lol i sound like an as$hole.. heh sorry bro.. not meant like that at all. i had to reread it again to see =]

[gingerhippy69]

i think it is v.good for your first attemp....u should have seen my first flash orintated site...IT sucked!!! :lol:

now that u have got the basics of flash...as the others say...why not try spicing it up a bit...

a bit of animation wouldn't go a miss...

overall...well done...

cheers...ben...

[tdfwrestling]

dude that site wasn't made in flash! that was made in swish, i betchya.

on the tute for making sites on swish ((yawn)) it has that same site but u changes all the words to shark stuff. and your intro, thats done on swish too. im so sure of it.

but well done. swish is so boring u to use i give u all the credit for doing it.