Line Art

[Dog-E]

Hi, i want to get your opinions on some works of mine. They are all made in flash and i did no effects, nothing. Can you say sth?

Blossom (http://www.boomspeed.com/dogi88/blossom.jpg)
Cloaked (http://www.boomspeed.com/dogi88/cloaked.jpg)
Dwarf (http://www.boomspeed.com/dogi88/DwarfAnime.jpg)

[.soulty]

they all look pretty good, Nice capture of motion, but to me they look like they are one step from being complete. not sure , maybe some more shading, or more fine details. looking good though.

.soulty :)

[mlk]

the eyes of the first one are weird, but all of them look ok =)

[Starpromo]

The first is good and the best of the three but i agree with the eye comment.

[sintax321]

some more shadding would definatly help.