Need some input for flyer design.

[Kibagami Jubei]

I only got the back and it's a small version of it (no need to post the the huge version). But the front will be done soon, basically they want me to have the rush events with info, and the rush party with more info. Tell me what you think.

[REEF·]

Nice. I like it. Attacts my eyees to all those shapes and colors.

[mmatt]

its very busy, but you've done a nice job of laying everything out so that it's easy to read. and the rounded edges on the pics is a nice touch.

[nobody]

yeah, it looks really nice
the only thing i can think of is work with your colors and stuff, it's hard on the eyes.
try similar shades or complimentary or tertiary colors. Might looks better. The design is great though.

Nice job
(sorry for the sloppy critique)

[Kibagami Jubei]

Sorry didn't pay attention in art class, complimentary, tetiary? What's that! :h: Sounds really important, can you be more specific please, i'm one big confused amateur. Thanks for the tips guys cause I was feeling so bad about making this, I wasn't at all satisfied with the final result.

[iLikePie]

a few things... firstly, i believe it should read 21+ to get DRUNK

obviously you'll have to change the dates on the different nights as well (they can't all be 1/2/04 :P)

secondly, with those inset images (middle right) i think the two of that guy with the white hat look a bit odd because they don't line up with the other ones - does that DJ symbol thingy have to be there?
another alternative could be to get rid of the white-hat-guy, and make the symbol bigger to fill the space.

I also feel that some of the elements are TOO squished together (i know that's the style you're using tho...).
particularly, i think that the dates are too close to the "rush.night" "pizza.night" etc.. it doesnt' quite feel balanced to me.

but despite these comments, i really like it :thumb:

[.soulty]

iLikePie :: crunk is slang dude...

I do agree with a few things you said, like the dude with the white hat, it looks like you ran out of images to use, unless thats a dj or something, even so you could have different images of him or of something else.

layout is nice, colours are cool , fresh, i agree with 28 (xxviii) about the body copy type, the colour would be harsh on the eyes. change it something more complimentry. and what he means by that is the colour that are opposite that colour on the colour wheel ..

Go here to check out the Colour theory (http://www.colourtherapyhealing.com/colour/complementary_colours.asp)

Type i agree might be too squashed but since its a young modern market you can get away with it, just as long as the important informative type is not squashed in a way that its not legiable.

Overall its a pretty cool flyer, lets see the front! :)

[Kibagami Jubei]

Yah, the dude with the white hat is supposed to be a dj, and there was supposed to be another DJ below him but i couldnt find his picture so i used his picture again to fill it in. And you're right, CRUNK IS SLANG! LOL! I didn't think it mattered, but hey i'm glad to see you understand the language. Thanks for the help guys. Now for some updates.

[Kibagami Jubei]

This is rom all of your tips and advice, so check it out i guess, here's the front, sponsors aren't there because we don't have any yet:

[Kibagami Jubei]

Here's the back peoples:

[.soulty]

Fresh...!! Very nice dude, blue looks good, love the front, the only thing i would b.i.t.c.h about is that the top of the back , i actually liked the older version of it (the BYA winter rush2004 part) i liked it before, because it stood out , type was much easier to read. things like the red stroke you have between brotherhood and honor ect.. you cant see because of the lines behind, it looks hidden and not legiable. hmmm the rest i like its just that top.

[.soulty]

isent "Y" epsilon? not upsilon ?

:::edit::: my bad my greek is rusty...your right :P

[nobody]

very nice, great job the second time around
:thumb:
very good use of color too

[Kibagami Jubei]

Thanks homies, your help has made this flyer great. I appreciate all the comments and criticism. And I will fix that top, thank you. HEHEHE!