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Game™
November 25th, 2003, 07:01 PM
Yeap. It's my latest design.

www.sunnym.tk

I worked pretty darn hard on it. The font is blury, is what I've heard. So I tried fixing that up.

Please give me comments and suggestions. :)

:nerd: SM

Laslett
November 25th, 2003, 07:26 PM
not bad. AS you say a bit blurry.

could encompass the site with s border for definition or even a sligt colour difference to give some definition to the used area.

Or could define each area of info

ahmed
November 25th, 2003, 08:08 PM
not to be mean or anything, but what not use html for a site as static as that? I mean seriously, you can make the exact same layout with plain html, it'll look much better and download faster, let alone viewable on more machines :)

G
November 28th, 2003, 10:14 AM
you could of been a little more adventorous with the layout I have to agree.

gmh526
November 28th, 2003, 11:37 AM
the splash needs a graphic or logo or something. id ditch the macromedia defualt buttons with the spinning star thing.

site: you could have done everything, EVERYTHING on that page in html. i wouldnt animate for animation's sake, but that seems to be too minimalistic, almost an abuse of flash.

but anyway, the buttons arent spaced properly.

it looks off. the header seems like a banner add since the rest of the site is just floating text. it needs at least an outline or something.

in the projects, portfolio, and links sections i dont like how youve got the blurry subsection text off to the left. looks wierd.

in the links section youve got a link to report dead links! you have three links on the page, i dont think it should be that difficult to maintain them!

whyd you make all the text into buttons? i keep clicking stuff that goes nowhere.

i dont know about the cursive font on the header either.

blog: nice job with the table there.

not bad, but the layout is sorta dull, if not nonexistant

Laslett
November 28th, 2003, 12:18 PM
It doesn't really seem to gel. Its sort of made up from bits of ideas and those don't really fit together seamlessly