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DDD
November 6th, 2003, 12:51 PM
okay this one is still for that daycare I posted a while back. They have been in business since 1907 and wanted a oldfashioned plus modern look. tell me whatcha think.
DDD
November 6th, 2003, 12:53 PM
this is the existing logo
senocular
November 6th, 2003, 01:03 PM
now that one's really nice. I only have a few very very minor complaints.

1) the blue vertical beams in the foreground get cut off from the cropping and make them spikey and sharp. It adds a little bit of tension, especially on the left side where theres another vertical spike from the negative space. Offhand I cant think of a way it can be avoided

2) The bell looks a lot like a hat. Might be just me :)

3) And probably the biggest: I cant help but think TACO BELL!
neverrain
November 6th, 2003, 01:06 PM
Senocular you beat me to it I was just about to say, is that a rip of the Taco Bell logo. :P

Good logo DDD they will like it. :D
DDD
November 6th, 2003, 01:07 PM
hahaha....yeah I think they are aware of the Taco bell thing. The colors are weird because I use used CYMK for print.....SO you may not see some colors correctly on a screen thus the hat look. I used Illus 10 and used meshes (oh how I love Illus. now)

Thanks for the comment Sen
reverendflash
November 6th, 2003, 01:08 PM
I have to agree with the 6 eyed freak... :D

I see Taco Bell bright and shiny...

maybe make the bldg red (little red school house), and mess with those spikes...

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DDD
November 6th, 2003, 02:09 PM
well I pitched it to them.......and they loved it. Now I have to redesign their print material :(

good idea rev on the red school house thing. Why in the hell did I not think about it. good thing I am using spot colors. Ill post a red one in a second.....

oh yeah wut spikes rev?
reverendflash
November 6th, 2003, 02:11 PM
as Sen said, the front of the bldg after cropping looks spikey...

that is all..

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DDD
November 6th, 2003, 02:49 PM
here is a red one with Rev's suggestion and a lil of sen's if I understood him correctly
reverendflash
November 6th, 2003, 03:11 PM
I like it a lot better, and for some reason, I don't get the Taco Bell assoc. so much anymore.

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DDD
November 6th, 2003, 03:16 PM
yes I like it much better also. thanks for the suggestion rev.
Laslett
November 6th, 2003, 04:14 PM
That has a kinda colonial feel to it
mdipi
November 6th, 2003, 09:53 PM
the red makes it feel more warm and thats important. the blue was almost a bit cold. looks really good though.
reverendflash
November 6th, 2003, 10:07 PM
Originally posted by DDD
yes I like it much better also. thanks for the suggestion rev.

no prob...

sometimes theys just comes to me...

:D

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Millad
November 7th, 2003, 07:05 AM
Great work. I like the red one
UNFLUX
November 7th, 2003, 01:02 PM
definitely the red! :thumb:

what happened to the other idea, it was refused?
morse
November 7th, 2003, 01:20 PM
Did somebody say taco bell?
DDD
November 7th, 2003, 01:25 PM
unflux; yeah basically.....they said they were looking for something a lil less modern.......I'll find a use for it somewhere else tho.
UNFLUX
November 7th, 2003, 02:26 PM
less modern? wow ok :h:

I can imagine, "We are looking to update our logo and identity,
but we don't want anything new or modern." kinda scary
prstudio
November 7th, 2003, 02:34 PM
yes, red looks way better-

great job man!!!
DDD
November 7th, 2003, 02:38 PM
Originally posted by UNFLUX
less modern? wow ok :h:

I can imagine, "We are looking to update our logo and identity,
but we don't want anything new or modern." kinda scary

Yeah tell me about it.....It's cool tho thi is what they are paying me for. So? Believe it or not I am actually working on another logo. She just had another idea.......sometimes I hate this business.......

eh well I tend to recycle concepts so it will not go to waste.

thanks pr