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[darkstarclone]

i've been working on this for a while and i've got this far on it. take a look. any comments are welcome like on colors text actions, likes dislikes. anything. everything is welcome.

http://www.paradiselimos.net/mgam/sxe

[chordmasta]

its ok, kinda lacing content,

try nesting the links in some kind of container, for a visual effect. they look kinda boring just sitting there.


nice job

[darkstarclone]

nesting the links? they are sitting right there on the page. and what about the color fade? is that not an effect? i don't get it

*confused* :(

[Yeldarb]

i like it
the color change is really smooth :)

[G]

The menu effects and fade effects from section to section are very smooth. Obviously the site isn't finished (content) but I think it will look real good when finished. Keep it up.

[IMJ]

I like the color transitions and the clean design.

I'm not too sure about the elastic effect on the scrollbar though.

Looking forward to the final version :)

[gmh526]

kinda bland.
its under construction, but given the 1 or two completed pages it seemed like there was a lot of blank space. the menu is on one side, and on the other is a text field with 300 pixels of bg in between. put something there or make it smaller.
good start, very clean. interesting effect on the scrolbar easing.

[Voodoo~Chile]

I like the color transitions, and the overall feel of the design...
but there is to much empty space.
I don't know, try maybe making it smaller.
It looks very clean and simple, which I like.

My only suggestion is to lessen the amount of empty space.
nice job!

would you check my site?
http://www.kirupaforum.com/forums/showthread.php?s=&threadid=35716

[T-O]

Man that is really really nice site!.
I like the menu, clear and clean + smooth+++
The colors run smoothly. masterfull

[darkstarclone]

i was meaning to fill those empty spaces with vector art from each site. so added a little taste of waht i wanted to do. what do you think now? :q:

[zylum]

first off, in the news, it says something like use the scroll to the left to scroll the text when the scroll is to the rigth. also, i think the buttons should be animated ie rollover since this is a flash site, you should make it as animated as possible. finally, the image of the woman isn't that good. the edges aren't that smoothe and i could see the "see through places" ie the faded box around the image. i suggest you just copy the image in flash (put the original image on a lower layer, lock the layer and trace the image using the line tool. and then delete the graphic while keeping the vector image. for more info on that, check out this tut... line art (http://www.kirupa.com/developer/mx/lineart.htm))

on the plus side, i really like the transition, really smoothe. also like the contact button... "nifty" :beam:

good luck on finishing this project,

-zylum

[darkstarclone]

thanks forfinding that typo.

well women are curvy!!! no doubt about that. thats what makes it so hard traceing these pictures. i'll work on it. just need to spend a day working on the vector ladies.

[zylum]

check the tut... it's quite simple:)