SNOW 2 is finally finished

[ICED T]

hey guys errr... girls what ever you are:)
the site is finally finished it's a spacial thing but it's an acceptable site. all you have to do when you get to the main page click on the version 3 botton it says corss over v.3 Snow.


www.cross-over-production.tk


fell free to give me some advice.

Thankx in advance



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[gmh526]

well, ill tell you what i think. again.

im still not terribly crazy about the background. on high resolutions you see an awful lot of it. i dunno, doesnt do it for me.

maybe center the page vertically?

the txt in the music center is impossible to read on my res.

if your aim is to appear to be professional, i suggest you at least spell "professional" correctly. theres a ton of gramatical and spelling errors.

i like the button rollovers, but they take a while to alpha out. speed up the tween.

transitions are nice, except the opening one. i didnt really like it.

good job

[DDD]

your site kinda gets lost in the bgrd because of the bgrd and the contrast to it....some of the transitions seem like they would be better if they were faster but overall I like it.

[CoDe-ReD]

Also, I think you should get your framerate up. And'I'm sure it's not my PC, cuz I have a 2800+. Check your framerate and make it like 30 or 40.

[T-O]

yep. slow in deed.

[Coppertop]

It didn't load.

please give the link of your site that .tk is forwarding

[FlashFish]

I used to have that background pattern on some pyjamas that my nan bought me when i was 4. Nice colours though.

[urbanjackal]

OK it is obvious that you can make a web page. Congrats. But I have a few points I would like to bring to attention

1.) I feel you really need to learn how to spell.... (At first I thought you were taking the pi**, putting all those grammatical mistakes in on purpose)

2.) send that background straight to the bin

3.) Centre the main movie

4.) Sort out the text under the mp3 player

5.) Dump that spirally thing on the home page :d:

And finally try A BIT HARDER, I honestly believe you can make a lot better site then the 1 you have produced, I don’t mean to sound harsh, I just believe you could create something a lot more original... there is plenty of assistance in all the aspects of web design in this forum even down to proof reading your text… Just ask


//Urbanjackal ;)

P.S. look foward to V4

[urbanjackal]

sorry i just realised that you are only 14.... sorry

dam i wish i could create something like that when i was 14...... hats off to you mate decent work....

*edit* dam i feel bad *edit*

[IMJ]

For your age, this is an extremely good effort. The background itself are quite nice, but it does distract you from the site.

It's a shame about the spelling mistakes. Also, I don't think you should mention that you are a very good webdesigner. It sounds rather arrogant. Let the visitors judge your skills.

It may have sound harsh, but it's meant for the better. I definitely think you can go further, so keep it up!

Cheers

[Voodoo~Chile]

I liked the whole thing... nice efforts!!!
The only thing I didn't like so much was the background.
It distracts too much attention from the page itself.
Other than that... COOL!

I also have a page for Site Check... take a look if you want! ;o)
http://www.kirupaforum.com/forums/showthread.php?s=&threadid=35716

[ICED T]

Thankx for the comments guys, sorry i wasn't able to answer you sooner i didnnnnn't have power for a week becuase of hericain JUAN, well any way,

It's a shame about the spelling mistakes.
about the spelling problems i have only been in canada four years a ago and my english isn't my strong point yet.
sorry i just realised that you are only 14.... sorry
don't worry it was a simple mistake;)

[Nikini]

delete the background, oh, and one more thing, if you click on the headset icon the sound starts playing again over the old one and it sounds really nasty..Ilike the font and the style altough the background really messes everything up. If this is the begining than go on, but without the background and fix the bug i was talking about later. Everything's cool so GO ON!!

[superman ii]

yeah bump up the frame rate the transitions are slow and brush up on the spellings, but it is a pretty good site.

[Coppertop]

It still wont load....


ICED T, can you give me the address of the site that www.tk is forwarding? ex: my address would be www.coppertop.madsims.net - but is forwarded to .tk

[ICED T]

Thankx again guys,

Coppertop here is the link www.geocities.com/tiampero2000

see ya

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[aveceva]

hmm...i agree with the person who said you need to push the frame rate up. the begining transition looks like there are only 3 frames in it going at 12. personally i dont like the background but i love that shining thing in the middle with the gradient light spinning thing :D keep at it :D