please comment

[Flashmatazz]

Site (http://www.twc.sshunet.nl/~swmvanbo/atop/)

It's a site I'm making for a small foundation (it's not finished yet)
Visitors will probably be people with little internet experience, therefore I'm trying to make it as simple and accesibble as possible.

Please have a look and tell me what you think, things I should change etc. Does it look ok on different platforms, browsers and screen resolutions?

Thanks.

[gmh526]

first off, the left box outline is cutoff. i dunno if u intended it to be that way or what, but it looks off center..

i would suggest centering it vertically perhaps for people on high resolutions.

on the second page, the pictures are awfully grainy and the frames are kinda cheesy.

im not terribly crazy about the colors or the fancy font, but thats personaly preference, so keep em by all means.

ur goal was simplicity and accessibility; u certainly accomplished that very well. its very clean and simple. good job

[Flashmatazz]

Thanks.

I made some changes and added 2 pictures to make it a bit more attractive.

The pictures on the second page I took from their old site, as I'm waiting for more content. So they will be replaced.


Please have a look and tell me what you think.

[T-O]

It's a very nice site for a HTML standaard basic non flash site.
I would make it abit smaller the card you got there in the "where is it section"

I would REALLY krank up the picture detail.
You got 3 page's there. They might as well be very nice page's


I got one tip fer you: USE FLASH!!

ow yea. It's a teen meeting place!!. This is not really a site that i would like to fisset. Redo it in total! I mean a baby in the banner. Pink blue pastel colors. i think you want teenager to fiset the site not a nanny day care center.

[Flashmatazz]

Actually, I'm making the site for a foundation for teenage mothers. So, yes the visitors will probably be teenagers, but I don't want to do it all flashy and stuff. That's not what it's meant for.

The backgroundcolor was their choice, so I'm keeping that.

I'm not sure about the baby in the banner, but for sure there has to be something of a picture in there.

Also I might change the color of the frame. Maybe just plain white?

Anyways, thanks for the comments (and I'm not going to do it in Flash, sorry....)

[Flashmatazz]

I made some changes. Just trying things out, and yes I did change the backgroundcolor although I said I wouldn't do that...

Constructive criticism needed...

Thanks.