site check please...

[hunnie]

hi all, I have made a site for a clan and was wondering if anyone have any problems viewing it. Any critiques will be appreciated. Thx!...view site (http://www.fno.graphicwebs.com)...or go to http://www.fno.graphicwebs.com

[ICED T]

your site is nicly done but there are a few problems:

1.) when the intro starts it says "where ever you are we will" you can't see the "find you"

2.) this word that stat's with an S fades in and out with out completely showing it self.


i really like how you messed around with graphics, very nice work:)

ICED T:p:

[m_andrews808]

ya I like, I like the colours you've chosen and the layout of the site, all the text is nice and clear and shows up well agains your colours shceme, however apart from the intro I don't see why you've chosen to do it in flash, there's nothing there that couldn't have been done in plain ol' html

cheers :P

[hunnie]

thanks for your replies...I know that I did little flash on this site, the reason is because evertime I incorperate alot of flash into a site I have some problems with it. I was looking for a clean and easy to read site which it something different than what I have been doing in the past. I do plan on revamping the site using more flash content. In the movie I was thinking I should change the font since people have prob's viewing it.

thank you all for your comments...
any other comments or suggestions?

[G]

Is there a pre - loader on the site? if so I didn't see it. Apart from that good job.

[hunnie]

yes there is one preloader in the flash movie.
there is really no need for a preloader for each page because the files are small.

[Coppertop]

Very very nice. very well done. I can't find anything wrong.

by the way, whats the song called? I love it!

[gmh526]

good lord almighty that site takes a long time to load. im on cable, maybe it had something to do with ur host, i dunno, but the "patience" factor made me close it. from what i saw (the splash page and the preloader) it looked fine......

[hunnie]

coppertop: its called "drown" and is a freeware on flashkit (heh)
gmh526: are you viewing in on a intranet? if you are it could be that alot of ppl are using up the bandwidth...if not, i'm not sure why it would load slow...


thx for your insights...

[gmh526]

my lan has a shared connection, but theres only 2 pcs on it. my isp seems to have a lot of "peak times" when service sucks no matter what.

i tried it again, and it loaded fine. i like the site, nice colors, but dont really see why u used flash, other than the intro and the flying cirlces in the background.

add some transitions between pages, was there a preloader for the main site? dont remeber seeing one. some button rollovers might be nice too. is there an off button for the music? nm, i found it. :)

the font isnt really my favorite, slightly blurred, but not badly.