this better?

[themachine37]

ok so here is a screen shot of the soccer site

is it any better? its still kind of simple but i added some other things.


any idea how i can improve on the white space?

[Yeldarb]

it looks good

how i can improve on the white space?
umm... how about some content?

[themachine37]

well yeah! lol. in the box, but i am talking about the stuff on the right, and right above the box. i just kind of stuck that swipe thingy there cuz it looked so blank.

[iLikePie]

y don't you remove the box, and use that whole area for content?
i think that would look good, and you could leave the swish thingy in the background

[themachine37]

you dont think that would be too much white space?

[DDD]

depends on how you organize your stage white space is not bad. Negative white space is what can kill........lemme see what you come up with.....but you are definately on the right track and a definate improvement thumbs up so far from me.

[eilsoe]

it'd be better than that box :beam:

[dessoya]

u could place some quick links below the box or add a jukebox...
there are so many ways...
maybe a bit decent dirt is not bad here...

just my opinions

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[mlk]

soccer ball soccer pics (wait is it football or football ?)

you know whad would look really good ? if you added some sort of reflection on your logo, to give it a metallic sortof metallic look...

You know, a white streak going across the logo