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gbd
September 15th, 2003, 05:43 PM
...and tell me what u feel :)


http://www.lollobaer.de/gbd2/

gmh526
September 15th, 2003, 07:32 PM
not bad...

1) running at 1280 x 1024, your swf takes up most of the page. the rest is white space. center your movie or add a bg for the html or something to fix that.

2) not crazy about your font or the size for the nav and titles

3) i couldnt read much, but it seems theres very little content given the large amount of space. utilize it. put something there.

4) some stuff is off center.

5)the rolloever effects act wierd sometimes if u click around a lot really fast.

6) on the about page- the cell shaded dude, colors dont go well and it overlaps the nav

however, the code seems to be in place and working well. fix some of that stuff and spruce it up and you'll have a nice site

MrMass
September 16th, 2003, 01:36 PM
New one huh :)

I do like the logo, and the new layout, If I remember good the other one was smaller, why make it more bigger if you have nothing to feel it up with :) link me section needs a better graphic, try looking for a software called poser and you could make a better image with the easy to use human architecture, or maybe spend some more time on this illustration, looks like you are in the army, but you are not, I would rather see your picture then this one.

Macromedia FlashPlayer6 required...you do need that but not there, you could replace it with just an F sign for flash, rip it off my site :) or make a splash page with that link to get a flash.

I would say I liked the first one better, because was smaller and the background image was nicer :)

just keep on redesigning, until you say to yourself o man this is cool I did this? d a m n

peace

maxticket
September 16th, 2003, 02:45 PM
A couple things:

First, the square that slides in to meet your mouse when you roll over the menu jerks back and forth a bit. This is because when you roll off a button, it slides back off the screen, and there's a gap between each button, so as you move the mouse back and forth, the square starts to retreat, then slides back to your cursor. I'd recommend expanding the buttons' hit areas so there would be no gap between them.

The other issue is that I can't read your content. But that's my problem. :sigh:

gbd
September 17th, 2003, 12:53 PM
the pic: yes i know :) i wanted something special not a normal pic.
thx for help and new ideas i'll make it better next time i promise ;)
i just hav little problems at school ;), so the new site will take a little bit longer
gbd