Logo Check

[Rafi33]

Hey guyss... I have just finished working on a logo for a web management /rental company.. I have uploaded it at http://www.stormpages.com/lathiyal .....let me know if I need to make any improvements or take things out..open to all criticism..

thanks
Omar

[asphaltcowboy]

it's way too plain m8. a good start, but definitely needs some tweaking. the mouse could be a lot bigger. perhaps leave the black text (or maybe move it so it's going along the bottom of the circle rather than over the top). and you need to do something with the red text - try some different fonts, make it stand out more!

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[Rafi33]

Yea i think so too..The thing is the company is kind of conservative, so I am a bit iffy about using a cutting edge or just a nicer font contrasty font.

[Coolidge]

I have to agree with the "Cowboy.":cowboy:

Font is way too plain.
The text should be centered to the top or the bottom.
There is too much white space inside of the circle.
Your Illustration (of the mouse) should be bigger.

And please......Spell check. ;) ---------(system)

Conservative does not mean it has to be dull.

[dessoya]

agree with the others... maybe u should place the text "Web based service blahblah" across from the blue halfmoon and write it in capitals... just a opinion...

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[Rafi33]

thanks guys..all this was much help

[urbaneve]

on a lighter note (and no offense intended whatsoever)-- the mouse with trail looks kinda like....... well ya know..... like ................... a solo sperm swimming all by himself *snirt

(so -- what were you thinking when you drew this -- hehe)

please dont get mad -- it was meant to make you smile

[DDD]

I would emphasize the mouse more and jazz up the font....maybe convert them to paths and do some stroke and what have u.....But the logo has promise......Also I notice the circle is huge in comparison to the logo........something has to give there,.....keep it up