Opinions on a new splash page

[jay-em]

What do you all think so far?


LINK (http://www.jmkm.com/splash.html)

[nobody]

Your logo is way way too bright.. it doesn't go with the box and baby at all. I like the idea though. Try making your logo brown like the box or something.

[Digitalosophy]

yea im not sure there is a relationship between the two

[DDD]

actually the drop shadow is what kills it for me/ It is not aligned or placed correctly in terms of light source and the illusion of a wall behind the box. I kinda detracts from the whole 3d or sense of depth with the baby being in the box. Hope I made sense. Also add something in the background white does not do it for me. But I definately like the concept and where you are headed. Just massage it a lil bit.

[themachine37]

its a baby in a box!!!!! LOL


nice

[prstudio]

OOO OOO OOO

take your logo, make it black and white...then "map" it onto the cardboard behind the kid !!! !!! !!!

killer tight if you can pull it off m8!
(felt like sounding british)

will need some blur, lighting, maybe some distortion and skew, and some um, grain texture, and maybe a grunge brush...

oh and select just the kid and "hue/saturate" him to a green color...and nix the red dot on his forehead...

sorry lol i just saw the whole thing and got inspired...that means i like it...didn't mean to run with it there....hehe...ughhh

oo oo oo

[Cybjorg]

You may want to adjust the levels on the baby-in-the-box picture. It looks a little washed out.

[jay-em]

pr--- I will keep working on that. Very good ideas!
the red dot was a birth mark, it's gone now. SHE is 11 and my cousin. That was funny tho... lol
____jMkM

[telekinesis]

Get rid of that font. . . .

[nobody]

No comment on eating?

[DDD]

still say the shadow kills it.