First attempt at line art

[Flashmatazz]

Hi,

I just followed Kitiara's line art tutorial and came up with my very first line drawing.

www.arjengosman.nl

Tell me what you think of it, things that could be improved etc.

Thanks.

[DDD]

that is very good. for any attempt let alone a first. Good job

[Flashmatazz]

Thanks a lot. :)

[Kitiara]

Indeed, it is very well done. :) Was it taken from a photo or a picture? I'm guessing photo... It looks very realistic. :)

As far as things that can be improved go, I would suggest making more of a contrast between the dark and the light tones on the skin. Probably make the dark shade a bit darker, that might make things a little clearer. :)

But really, you've done a great job here. :)

[mlk]

sweet, wish I could come up with something like that - the only thing i don't really like is his hand , the shape is weird somehow

[Flashmatazz]

Thanks for the compliments. That definitely made it worth the hours I spent on it :}

@Kitiara: It was indeed taken from a photo, imported in Flash.

and I followed your advice about the contrast. Thanks.


I'm happy you all like it. Makes me kinda :beam: