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redViper
September 6th, 2003, 12:28 PM
I'm going to send them to him soon, but just looking for your feedback. I'm also gonna make some more, just to see what I can come up with ... I personally think I can come up with better. But anyways ... he's a dentist .. and yea, he's paying me! :beam:

<a href="http://www.n3xtmedia.com/yiu/001.jpg" target="new">Click here for #1</a>
<a href="http://www.n3xtmedia.com/yiu/002.jpg" target="new">Click here for #2</a>
<a href="http://www.n3xtmedia.com/yiu/003.jpg" target="new">Click here for #3</a>
<a href="http://www.n3xtmedia.com/yiu/004.jpg" target="new">Click here for #4</a> <b>NEW!!</b>
Comment's and Critics rejoice!

<b>UPDATED</b>
Just added #4.. i like this one
Voetsjoeba
September 6th, 2003, 12:53 PM
2 ... The image is a good addition to the overall colour scheme and layout :) The first one would have too much text.
asphaltcowboy
September 6th, 2003, 12:54 PM
Personally, i like the seoncd one (minus those scan lines) - it's very.. trendy.. however... it is a dentists' surgery.. is it supposed to be 'hip and trendy'? Personally, I'd go for that one, but chances are he'll probably go for the 'safer' #3

Generally when dealing with clients, it's good to try and get 3 different layouts/ideas: 2 should be more on the sensible side of things, and make the other one a little more creative (even though you know they'll probably never go for it :))

good work though :beam:
T-O
September 6th, 2003, 02:14 PM
Happy days, I can remember my first paying client. very emosial event.

Try to take the first pic and let the lil' menu pop up there on the right so it. looks like the second picture.

Dude, Center your Site! It's on the left now. I am talking about the 1/2 picture.
redViper
September 6th, 2003, 10:32 PM
..updated?
asphaltcowboy
September 7th, 2003, 05:17 AM
oooh... now this is getting tough.. I say take the title bar from #4 and whack it onto the top of #2. I think i prefer the page layout for #2 slightly better.. though #4 is pretty cool...

:)
T-O
September 7th, 2003, 05:46 AM
yea that's the stuff 4 it the best now.

bit empty on the right. tho
eilsoe
September 9th, 2003, 08:31 AM
indeed, try a merge of the nav on #4 and the design on #1, I think that'd work.. :)
sigmastudio
September 9th, 2003, 09:29 AM
i like this one most: http://www.n3xtmedia.com/yiu/004.jpg