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[papashat]

nice fluid motion man, kudos on the color selections and images. personal portfolio here > http://www.papas-hat.com/rob/
'have a good time, all the time'

[papashat]

just finished it, constructive feedback would be appreciated. >> http://www.papas-hat.com/rob "It now appears that the way the universe began can indeed be determined, using imaginary time" s. hawking

cheers

[asphaltcowboy]

wow, that's pretty sexeh! fast loading (reasonably :)), simple and yet very effective. I particularly like how the page first assembles itself at the start. nice work :thumb:

[Voetsjoeba]

I like it too :) I know the song, but it would be better if you played the whole song instead of a loop. I keep waiting everytime for the "Aaaaaaaaaaah -hahA" but it never comes :P A bit more variation in the sound effects would be welcome :) The assembling is nice indeed =) I like it :thumb:

[asphaltcowboy]

read the rules: http://www.kirupaforum.com/forums/showthread.php?s=&threadid=31733 :sure:

NOTE: mine and kit's post refer to papashat's post in SotW :thumb:

[Kitiara]

On this occasion I'm feeling leniant so I'm moving this to Site Check.

Next time it's a straight deletion. The rules for SotW are quite clear.

Since there's two threads on the same site in here now, I've merged them as well.

[BadMagick]

You might not want that subliminal message that "Bush Sux" on the preloader ... made me close the site down. But in you best interest, I opened the site again. I'm sure you'll have some other people who will disagree and want to leave your site too. I'm not saying this as a Bush supporter, but in design terms only. You don't want to do anything to alienate your audience

I like the site design. It's fresh :) I kinda don't like the fact that the music starts from the fade in when you click to visit a section of the site from the main. Kinda cool loop too ... I goes well with the site.

[papashat]

all constructive criticism is greatly appreciated. As for mr. b. magick, this is a 'personal portfoilio' site containing free and independent thought, therefore 'alienating your [my] audience' due to a minor political barb is of little to no concern. thanks again.

[njdboy]

diggin the Indian music. Very easy navigation, I felt very comfortable on the site which is cool. I like the word "Web" changing to different words mousing over it.

Maybe have something in that big green area when the user has not selecting anything? Seems a little bare without anything there.

I like how the image borders expand to the image size. Is that an actionscript that does that? I think so, I need a code that does that for my site I am developing.

Overrall, very nice! The navigation is cool and the site is very user friendly.

[papashat]

hey njdboy, the site is in a 2 frame frameset with all elements centered within. the bottom frame is set to never scroll, with a centered black table set to the exact width of the flash file above.

thanks for the critique, much appreciated.

[G]

Unique pre-loader I like it when you see something new. Different rollovers again adding to the originality of the site. apart from those though I feel the rest of your site is pretty bog standard, maybe you should keep on developing it a while longer.

Maybe you should create a logo for the site.

[gmh526]

very nice, but sites that require me to go from a menu to a page and then back to the menu to go to a new page always annoy me. since you only have 3 pages, it may not be too much of a nuisance to make transitions from p1 to p2 and p3 and so forth instead of main to p1, p2, and p3

very nice though