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IMJ
September 4th, 2003, 10:05 AM
Hello everybody,

I've been following Kirupa for some time now and I finally decided to register to this forum.

Since it's my first post, I guess I'll try get some feedback on my site: http://www.visualcreature.nl

It's a rather simple portfolio site. I'm in the planning stages to create a second site soon. Any comments would be welcome :)

Thanks!

T-O
September 4th, 2003, 12:27 PM
dude is this a template?


<!-- #BeginTemplate "/Templates/vc_page.dwt" -->

but flash is ok boring tho. but ok.
nice clear site.

lot of things going
the tikker and the banner are great. :thumb:
the scroller is awesome in IE but netscape it doesn't fit in the lay-out. So another IE only site. :sign:

thediablo
September 4th, 2003, 01:13 PM
ok dude...

i think you need to work in the menu a lil bit more... it dosent fit in the design very well... work with the font and the buttons...

the scrolling text at the bottom... dont know... why dont use a flash effect besides a scrolling thing...

and the iframe could get messy in Netscape :P

buuuut...

i love the flash header's they are very decent... just chilling there... peacefully... you can work a lil more on them but i like them :)

overall...

nice work !

gmh526
September 4th, 2003, 08:12 PM
need transitions or something

IMJ
September 5th, 2003, 05:43 AM
thediablo: Yeah, I agree the font doesn't fit that well. It was used in the early design of the logo, but didn't change it with the buttons.

T-O: The Flash header is not meant to animate a lot. It was meant to be move around peacefully like thediablo said. I'll be starting on a full Flash site soon. So I'll put that up when ready :P

Thanks for feedback!

MrMass
September 5th, 2003, 09:18 AM
I like it...now try connecting all those html pages in flash with a small transition. I didnt like the scrolling text on the bottom cause its like repeating on and on....as u navigate the site...I never get to read it to the end :P

nice layout

peace

G
September 5th, 2003, 10:04 AM
Get some rollover effects added to them plain buttons. And I agree that you should make the site 100% flash using dynamic text for the news and images etc..

papashat
September 6th, 2003, 02:35 AM
definately work on the font/nav buttons, perhaps a bit less white, best part of your site is your artwork. nice photo compositions.