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valour
January 3rd, 2009, 08:44 AM
the bird is from smashingmagazine's freebies.

http://img504.imageshack.us/img504/8348/bluebirdcopyvg7.png

edited copy: http://img84.imageshack.us/img84/2930/bluebirdcopydd2.png

Sage_of_Fire
January 3rd, 2009, 10:14 AM
It's good, but I'm not sure why the top background isn't smooth. It has two horizontal lines running through it where the pattern doesn't match up. I think those detract slightly from the layout.

valour
January 3rd, 2009, 11:01 AM
Edited copy is up. Thanks for the feedback

TheCanadian
January 3rd, 2009, 01:14 PM
I think a logo is the last place you want to use someone elses freebies.

Pasquale
January 3rd, 2009, 10:39 PM
I think a logo is the last place you want to use someone elses freebies.

Seconded. I think you'll start finding people wondering where they have seen that twitter bird before.

I think you need some more contrast, and areas of less saturated blue for readability!

mr.skribbs
January 5th, 2009, 11:36 PM
Cool Beans!

Here are my beefs:
- Personally the blue is a bit too rich for me... (like on the bottom) the lighter one is pretty chill.
- Logo looks sweeet! But it doesn't really have the same look and feel as the site (more web 2.0)
- Play around with the fonts as well they look a bit off.

Other than that I like the minimalistic approach, but it could be executed a bit better

BoonDock
January 6th, 2009, 08:43 AM
Seconded. I think you'll start finding people wondering where they have seen that twitter bird before.

I think you need some more contrast, and areas of less saturated blue for readability!

That bird did look vaguely familiar ... ;)