Please check my site

[jael2222]

Hi,

This is my first real flash site, so it's still a little rough around the edges and I'm still testing/tweaking it.

If any of you have suggestions/opinions, please let me know, I'd appreciate it a lot. Thanks.

http://www.lonelyangel.com/

[awligon]

very nice, you could add a few more special effect type things to the intro, like some lightning or something but it looks great. Looks like you put a lot of work into the uniformity of the html and flash sites. Great job