Smiley Critique

[Sgtbaker84]

I figured at one point or another we're going to want to critique a smiley or two.
I'll go ahead and star off...

the second raaaaaalph looks like Pac-Man had too much to drink one night, lol.

[sekasi]

Redelites smiley is :fab:

The pacman puke is great too :D

[Adam]

Redelites smiley is :fab:


I agree :love: though I don't think animated gifs are allowed.

and what, no one gonna make fun of my cabbage with ears? :D

[Sgtbaker84]

Lol, i personally thought it was pretty funny...although now that u mention it, it does kinda look like cabbage. lol

[Templarian]

Yoda smiley is awesome. Nice work on that one man.

For the flag ones, might be a good idea to make the smilie reflect the location a little bit.

DM that bear one is perfect.

[redelite]

Awwww... :( I just realized that... No animated ones allowed... back to the drawing board :look:

Btw, I like the Ralph, Darkmotion bear, Big Mouth, and of course the megamans..

[Adam]

Thanks, Templarian :D

redelite - I'm diggin the insomniac one :thumb:

[Gundark]

There are some pretty good entries so far. Looks like this should be a good contest!

I like the sombrero, yoda, dm's bear and insomiac. There were some other good ones too. I'm gonna try to make a couple more.

[Adam]

I'm probably gonna try my hand at some more too - coming up ideas seems to be the tough part. I guess that happens when there are already over 200 smilies here :lol:

[Gundark]

Yeah, I can't really think of anything other than character smilies. Those are fun to do though, so I'll leave the other smilies to more creative minded people.

[redelite]

:lol: @ the bacon and eggs one.. nice!

@Gundark -- I came up with mine from actually just posting something and couldn't find a smiley for what I wanted. (whoa... like just now.. gotta make another..)

[Adam]

Thanks. I just noticed the talk to the hand smilie :lol: That is great! That's the only downside to editing posts and adding new smilies in, I miss when new ones are added.

[redelite]

Thanks. I just noticed the talk to the hand smilie :lol: That is great! That's the only downside to editing posts and adding new smilies in, I miss when new ones are added.

Yeah I know what you mean, but we can always just give a heads up in here if you add to your list.. like I just did (Top Hat)..

[Adam]

I like it :) I was thinking last night that a bride and groom smilie would be cool - I thought of the groom one having a top hat and a bow tie.

[Templarian]

@BlackBlood: Maybe make your smilies not all the same try to personalize it for every country,

Japans: http://img220.imageshack.us/img220/346/smileyjapantj8.gif edit 2

France: http://img296.imageshack.us/img296/4623/smileyfrancegp9.gif edit 1

China: http://img134.imageshack.us/img134/7439/smileychinald0.gif but make this one better with hair probably that really huge hair style, edit 3

See how just a few small changes can make it http://kirupa.templarian.com/fab.gif

[Adam]

Good idea, Temp :)

Canada: :drink:

oops :D

[redelite]

Wow.. I didn't even notice the Metroid one, pretty slick! :thumb:

[Adam]

Gundark, you should consider trying to put some gold under the Mr T smiley. Nice work though :thumb:

[Templarian]

http://img136.imageshack.us/img136/2104/samuelljacksonzq7.gif

//I'm posting this here so I can edit it better when I get home. I'm going to make a perfect samuel l jackson smilie. My work monitors are TN so I need my laptops screen to get the colours right on this screen all colours look faded. He kind of looks like a basket ball player right now. Meh... maybe I just need to make his head shinner or give him one of those hats he always wears.

[Adam]

That could be a tough one. Good luck with it! :)

[Gundark]

Gundark, you should consider trying to put some gold under the Mr T smiley. Nice work though :thumb:

Yeah, I'd like to do that. I tried to do it earlier but I ran out of lunch time though and had to go back to work. I'll probably try again tonight. Mr. T definitely needs some gold chains!

[Adam]

agreed!

[redelite]

Man, I need to chill out, I'm getting 'smiley happy' :look:... it's like every time I finish one, I say "Oh I could make this one real quick!".

:lol: I can't wait to see the Mr.T and SamJackson..

[Gundark]

So I had some time while my program was compiling and I added some chains to Mr. T, let me know what you guys think.

[Adam]

Looks great :thumb:

redelite - just noticed the ones you added :lol: very nice!

[Templarian]

comstar, I think master chief needs the two lights on the side of his helmet for a little bit more detail. and the companion cubes heart needs to stand out more.

btw? I think its too hard to make it look like a specific person...
http://img162.imageshack.us/img162/2374/samuelljacksonca6.gif

http://peakperformances.co.za/insidepeak/wp-content/uploads/2008/04/tn2_samuel_l_jackson_1.jpg

[Adam]

That's a nice try though. It must just be tough. Looks good, and kinda looks like Morgan Freeman too. Maybe it could be generic black actor smiley :lol:

[sekasi]

Just have to say I'm blown away by the quality of the submissions.

Great work guys!

[Templarian]

That's a nice try though. It must just be tough. Looks good, and kinda looks like Morgan Freeman too. Maybe it could be generic black actor smiley :lol:
:blackactor: :lol: Hmm... if I had time I would make a Hugh Laurie Smilie which could double as a Gordon Freeman (Half Life) smilie.

[Adam]

then we could have generic white guy as well! :lol:

[Templarian]

Awesome smilie adam, festers going to love using that one.

[Adam]

Thanks :) I hope so.

[redelite]

:lol: I like the Mr.T and SamJackson, that is awesome.. Adam your Jason is sweet also..

Here is my vote for generic white guy if someone wants to make it :lol::lol:.. I made this a long time ago..

http://srncp.com/random/paulwalker.jpg

[Adam]

Thanks :)

Do you think the genius/einstein one I just added is too tall? I can take out the e=mc2 if need be. Thoughts?

[redelite]

:D Einstein looks cool, if yours is too tall then my top hat is too tall :P.. I like the e=mc2 in there

[Adam]

perfect, thanks :) I was thinking without the e=mc that it might lust look like generic old white guy :lol:

[comstar8199]

Ok I added some details to Master Chiefs helmet as well as the lights.

Tried to make the heart stand out more, but still keep the dullness of the shade from the game.

[Templarian]

Yea, that looks better.

I added this one. We should have a thread for people that don't have the time to make them and we can create them for them.
http://www.kirupa.com/forum/attachment.php?attachmentid=47679&stc=1&d=1219503331

//edit,

Gundark, awesome Boba Fett!

[Adam]

Gundark, awesome Boba Fett!

Double that!! Nice :thumb:

Nice Garfield, Temp :) (sorry if it's not suppoed to be Garfield, it looks like him)

[Templarian]

It's defiantly Garfield :lol:

[Maqrkk]

What do you all think of my smilies? First one (http://www.kirupa.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2374459&postcount=19) and Second one (http://www.kirupa.com/forum/showpost.php?p=2377015&postcount=30).

The first one is pretty simple, and the last was difficult for me to make.
These are my first smilies ever.. so no previous experience.

[Templarian]

First smilie, the mouth feels offset (make it wider by 1px to the right.

Second one, I think the icepack left side goes up too high making it look more hat like. The thermometer needs to be modified a little bit.

Other than that nice work.

[Templarian]

@randomagain, Your smilies colours are a little "off", you may want to stick to the standard colours. :P

[redelite]

:lol: Temp.. your bong smiley with the red eyes is cracking me up

[Adam]

:lol: Temp.. your bong smiley with the red eyes is cracking me up

:lol: I hadn't seen that one! :lol:

[Templarian]

Thanks.

We need more similies (even though I've only made 5 we need more ideas). I think we need to make a thread in random as most don't come down this far to read threads.

[redelite]

Hey Temp, I saw your heart ones.. I like them, but I was thinking maybe darker red..

Also, on the note of traditional smilies, you could try something like.. one happy with a heart to the top left/right of it... and the other angry or looking disappointed with a broken heart to the top left/right of it... I dunno, just a thought :sure:

[Templarian]

I'm going to redo the heart ones one so that the smilie is holding the heart out in front and one where its ripping it in half.

//edit, also try to make one better, I'm not really in this to win anything just to make smilies. :)

[redelite]

:lol: I can't wait to see the ripping in half one.. I'll see what I can come up with..

I was just going to initially make a few smilies I WANTED to see on the list, but then realized it's quite fun making these and it's like an addiction, I can't stop!

**Edit: BTW, wtf is that blue circle on the left side of the *lol* smiley???? :eyeup:

[Templarian]

:lol: << its a tear. hes laughing very hard.

[redelite]

:lol: << its a tear. hes laughing very hard.

ahhhhh gotcha

[redelite]

Okay Temp, I took a stab at what you were talking about.. the </3 is actually kind of hard the way you were describing it... its tough to get the full illustration out in such a small space..

Anywho without further ado..

http://www.kirupa.com/forum/attachment.php?attachmentid=47775&stc=1&d=1220019097 http://www.kirupa.com/forum/attachment.php?attachmentid=47776&stc=1&d=1220019101

** Edit: [random thought] Maybe the heart needs to be lighter so you can see it better?.. I dunno..

[Templarian]

I think the heart is too dark other than that its perfect (your definitely very skilled at making these things though :lol:, half of the new smilies will be yours)

I can easily tell hes ripping it in half.

See if you can make a soviet Russian smilie... I can't think what it would look like though, would be very useful for when ever someone says "In soviet russia blahs you"

btw, I withdrew mine from the thread

[Adam]

your definitely very skilled at making these things though :lol:, half of the new smilies will be yours)

I totally agree :thumb: I wonder if the Russian one could have one of those furry lamp shade hats or something like THIS. (http://www.randlltd.com/images/black_hat2b.jpg)

[redelite]

Okay I fixed the hearts, changed them to be a bit more on the PINK side... I made an attempt at the Soviet one you guys requested and this is what I came up with.. http://www.kirupa.com/forum/attachment.php?attachmentid=47778&stc=1&d=1220020185



Iyour definitely very skilled at making these things though :lol:, half of the new smilies will be yours


I totally agree :thumb:

Thanks a lot guys. Funny thing is I've never made them before this contest was posted. :-/

[Templarian]

Ehh... not so sure about the russian one, but don't really know what else would make it look russian.

Can you make a Bobbie (british police), we have :cop: but i think :bobbie: would be funny.

[Templarian]

@uwa_hajar, your smilie is a bit too anti-aliased might want to sharpen it up.

[TheCanadian]

You could make a snowman(girl) out of riveroaks' titty smilie.

http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/7458/snowzl3.gif

[motionman95]

You could make a snowman(girl) out of riveroaks' titty smilie.

http://img231.imageshack.us/img231/7458/snowzl3.gif

My that's....that's...quite odd. :puzzle:

[Templarian]

@Gundark, Those are some really nice star wars ones. I'm watching star wars on spike right no for the 1000x time amazing every time I see it.

[Gundark]

Thanks, they were pretty fun to make. I completely failed at making a C-3PO though. He always ends up looking like a golden faced guy with a small mouth.

The original Star Wars trilogy were my favorite movies as a kid. I still really enjoy watching them now.

[redelite]

:lol: @ the BiPolar one.. creative

[Babaloo]

@ the BiPolar one.. creativeThat didn't take me too long to do haha
Some of mine are a bit lame, I admit, but it's my first try with smileys =)

Luv the yoda, garfield, Calvin and Hobbes, Megaman, Xwing pilot, Mr T, sombrero, bacon & eggs, joker, Frankenstein, wassaaaaaaa, puny's upside down, storm trooper, sonic, the soviet, dilbert...

But my fav is rhynobot's big eye. It's so bizarre-- in a nice way. And consistent.
http://www.kirupa.com/forum/attachment.php?attachmentid=47895&stc=1&d=1220884564

Kudos to Adam, redelite, Temp and Gundark for their great and many entries too!