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brian monkey
August 3rd, 2003, 01:47 AM
justinaerni.deviantart.com
and
www.justinaerni.com

both boast some very creative, dark work done by the "master of depressionism" himself. justin is a painter, drawer, web-designer, writer, and so much more. please check out one of his sites for me and comment on his work. I am doing this for a summer project and I am trying to get massive feedback on a new style of art. thank you so much.

-brian monkey

darkstarclone
August 3rd, 2003, 02:05 AM
both boast some very creative, dark work done by the "master of depressionism" himself

true. i felt very disturbed looking at your pictures and artwork. but that is what art is. its someones mind and yours just happens to see this stuff.

as for the site i felt confused on what to click and where to go. it took me a while to see the picture menu. i guess i'm slow. all the pop ups really got to me. also maybe you can lower the file size of the pictures. i felt it was loading very slow.

good job though on the site. :A+:

the_transporter
August 3rd, 2003, 09:58 AM
Overall, it's not a bad site but it needs a bit more work.

The text for the menu is too small. The pictures seem to be a bit of low quality. There are too many pop-ups. Every link I click on has a pop-up.

It's not a bad site. Keep up the good work.

MrMass
August 3rd, 2003, 01:21 PM
menu should be much bigger and maybe on the top :) the images and gallery is dark art, I like that. I like when something scares me as I'm looking at it. Biography text is too close to the broswer on the left side....:) I like the art...very much!

peace

liam
August 3rd, 2003, 02:49 PM
i think it's OK, but not great.

i don't think the theme of the peices really capture the essence of depression very well. sure you can put someone crying in a corner, but does it scream with the emotion that the person is feeling? for me, i didn't get this feeling.

as for the site, i like the main navigation on the first page, but other areas of the site seem sloppy and hurried. consider maybe making a more dynamic and intuitive (not to mention quicker-loading) navigation scheme to your site, rather than having to click on the thumbnails each time.

pissant
August 5th, 2003, 10:03 AM
I'll have to ditto the_transporter here. At 1024*768, the text is way too small. Not many people want eye strain. You could maybe try pixel fonts if you need to keep the text size down?