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LabTech
July 31st, 2003, 02:11 PM
I've made some changes to my first flash website, following advice given to me in an earlier thread. Would love any further advice/critiques
TIA LabTech

www.jbimages.co.uk

eyeinfinitude
July 31st, 2003, 02:22 PM
Well one problem I noticed right away is that you set your movie's height and width to 100%.

By doing that, it is stretched out to fit the browser. Since you have some rastered images like the cameras, they're all pixelated due to the stretch.

You need to rethink things over and build a better layout. You should try to create some transition effect between sections to make it more interesting as well.

somdow
July 31st, 2003, 03:40 PM
also in my opinion, reformat the layout of the butts. i dunno, i always feel that contact should be last, letem get to your inner content 1st..

and the text is huge, makes me feel retarded

lwron
July 31st, 2003, 08:04 PM
first thing, it is very nice, but the buttons should be changed, contact imo should be last, and guest book second last, but hey maybe you are trying to make it different. also your font is to big, just make it smaller. and you should make the videos width and hieght static. Besides that very nice.

LabTech
August 1st, 2003, 11:00 AM
Many thanks guys for taking the time to look at the site and make your comments, much appreciated. You've given me some work to do :)