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Xzandar
July 25th, 2003, 08:07 PM
This is my first ever flash site. I mean, I've used flash on my official site before, but this is my first site that uses 75% flash. I'm kind of afraid to show this to people, but in the meantime, critiques will help me learn. :)

http://weezygirl.sytes.net

Oh yeah...the links in the content section do not work, as of current, as I am still working on those sections. :)


Thanks,
Chris
teet
July 26th, 2003, 01:30 AM
this isn't bad at all for your first attempt at a full flash site...not much content right now, so nothing to critique really

there's a tutorial on this site (use the search bar up top and type in "first flash site" or something like that) that is great for creating a site with nice transitions and easy navigation...you may want to check it out.

good luck :)

-teet
Xzandar
July 26th, 2003, 02:38 AM
Thankies. :) I've tried to keep it as eye-catching as possible for the little content my sister's site will have, as she only wants a gallery and a contact section. *sigh* She takes the fun out of this. LOL!

I'll look into it. Thanks, dude. :)


Chris
MrMass
July 26th, 2003, 05:06 PM
I like it! Has a soul :) ok instead of saying launch content, you could put enter or enter site, sounds more professional. I like the logo, but I would change the font Misty because its cheap arial font that comes on every computer, so lets say my mom can do the same! Ones content is launched I would keep the same logo from splash page instead of the dirty one that looks like a header more then a logo!

Content :) well u could add a link called bio, portifolio, about me, more then just gallery and contact, that all depence what you want to do with your site, provide services or make a small personal page that you can give to your friends to see. I wanna see your gallery working....you are cute :)

hope this helps

peace
Xzandar
July 27th, 2003, 04:17 PM
LOL! This is my sister's site, not mine. :-X

I'll let her know you said that, though. ;)

Sorry, if I didn't clarify well enough. :-X

Take a bow, MrMass, because it was you and EG that inspired me to do a 75% flash site. :)


Thanks,
Chris