Architecture 2008

[berkoWitZ]

Hellooo!

I just finished this design for a contest to decide the shirt of the architecture school of an university...I can change small details but not a LOT, I have to send it today, what do you think? Suggestions??

Thanks..

http://www.framecreation.com/arquitectura2008.jpg

[mlk]

I'm not sure we're in the same time zones but anyways, the text element looks a tad boring (either contrast font weights or font sizes/kerning etc...)

the rulers don't seem graphically well integrated

why not use a full white for the crane and distort it a bit (or rotate/move it around - it looks very static)

[Pasquale]

for a shirt? I'm not sure how well the design will translate to print as far as readability goes. Too much going on

[phorte]

what exactly does a crane have to do with architecture? Other than a crane is used to build architecture, its not really that intergrally to the ideals of architecture. And I agree with mlk, the scale rulers dont really intergrate that well. Maybe should of gone simpler and used the scale rulers as the main element. But i suppose ur deadline has passed now.

I always liked the shirts our architecture department put out. Just white, with blue text "Architects do it with models".