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DOOD
March 23rd, 2008, 02:13 AM
http://img518.imageshack.us/img518/5985/examplebx2.jpg
I'm going to try to have a flash gallery with a transparent background on this (if its possible) and leave the rest in html/css. The LOL! Hawk is going to have that speech box over in on hover. Just as a little easter egg,
/Updated, changed clouds to more realistic ones, and reduced the shadows on the logo a bit.
Pasquale
March 23rd, 2008, 03:49 AM
The shadows are too harsh on the white objects, and the clouds are not cloud-like enough. They just look like a random string of circles. The volume should be focused in the centre.
ajcates
March 23rd, 2008, 04:09 AM
The black stuff looks blurry while the rest looks clear and crisp. Also maybe put the menu in the clouds? I think it would look better all flash. Animation is key if your going for an outside environment look.
DOOD
March 23rd, 2008, 05:11 AM
I'd do an all flash, but I fail at flash.
/soo more realistic clouds, to match the grass and tree. And less bold of colors/shadows (I'll ditch the shadows all together.)
@darkmotion; The volume?
/Updated.
DOOD
March 27th, 2008, 01:54 PM
Bump.
Gundark
March 27th, 2008, 02:01 PM
Your hawk, tree and grass look kinda blurry or maybe there isn't enough contrast between them and the background?
Otherwise I like it.
Dark Angel
March 27th, 2008, 02:07 PM
Your design looks nice and clean.
I think the shadows are still to dark. The transparency on the clouds on the left side are looking bit weird.
I'm curious how it looks when you display the data.
Phenex
March 27th, 2008, 02:11 PM
- The shadow on the logo is still a bit too hard, make it softer.
- Your navigation needs more spacing.
- You need more clouds! They look like a stain on the sky right now...
Doc
April 1st, 2008, 06:26 PM
same thing you've heard...
the navigation is scrunched together
the tree is blurry compared to the rest
the left clouds transparency is off somehow? clouds dont really do that where I'm from? the clouds do look awesome, and I would use more of them if I were you!
nice job!
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